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by inediblefrogs

schedule November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ya know this might be wurrently PWP, but it could easily have a sequil, would love to see it if ya ever did make one actualy. Kiba, Shino, and Shika mm sounds too fun espeiclaly with the way ya have them here. Eitehr way fun fic and good job.
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It just gets better every time I read it. You really do have a great skill at capturing what makes each character sexy.
But this also makes me so sad that you haven't written more stories! Not only do I want more Shika/Kiba and the oh-too-delcious Shika/Kiba/Shino, but you still need to connect up to your main plotline with a Shika/Izumo story. Everyone else got to have sex with Izumo, why not Shikamaru!
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn. Da~amn! This was amazing. I was literally shivering at a number of parts. Kiba/Shika is my favorite pairing, and I have to say that this is my new favorite fic. I love stories that can explore the characters' fetishes while still remaining true to who they are, and I think you achieved this gracefully and powerfully.
I hate to be one of those people who cry "please continue!" but OMG if you wrote the sequel that needs to be written for this (Shika/Kiba/Shino my god! teh sexy), then I will love you forever.
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't say it enough... I LOVE YOUR STORIES!
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really really really enjoyed that....
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Every story... wow! I wish I could do it.. I don't know how you can do it but you capture their personalities and bring it to life. Thank you!
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmn. Wonderful, and delicious.
person charmpit
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah! Kiba Inuzuka is walking, talking, growling, beastly sex! I can't get enough! The world needs more Kiba smut! Please write more like this! This was excellent!
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So good! I really love the way you wrote them both, and the way they each approached sex was just perfect! The ending... the ending was sweet, and hopeful, and made me smile. ^__^ My favorite part? I'm still trying to figure out why it affected me so strongly, but when Shikamaru asked Kiba if he was going to tell Shino, and the part right after that - I just *melted*. Puddle of goo in my seat. Great, great interaction.

Loved it!
person Anon
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is just too delicious! So hot, hot, HOT!!! Thank you! I wish you'd continue on with the story =D