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for Watching and Waiting

by inediblefrogs

person Kattmad
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~*YaY*~ does a super happy dance...

I luffs it...even better than the nibble you shared with me first! and I am so glad you posted it for llyoung and didn't can it in frustration.

It is a great writing...Shino likes to play Shougi :D

LOVE LOVE LOVE

person Josh
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic. I came to read but I ended up doing a bit more then that to this brilliant piece. Anyways I would definately like to talk to you about writing a story together. I prefer to work with someone while writing. If you're interested please let me know ^^ Send me an email anytime. I know you don't know me at all but what better way to make friends then writing with someone eh? Lol anyways please let me know if you're interested.
Heart,
Josh
person Koji
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING!!!!!

Thank you for bringing more Kiba/Shika goodness to us!! This was...well, it made me tremble. Very, very nicely.

THANK YOU!!!

xxx
person cynaga
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome -
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great story. Are you going to write a sequel? I would really likme to see a Shino/Shika/Kiba(or any variation of these three) fic.
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was fantastic. It was just so perfect and smooth and in character. I could see every moment happen in my mind. Thank you so much for sharing this piece of a possible twisted side to Skika and Kiba. MMMMM Kiba snanks.
person jOjo
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story.(^_^)^
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well. That was certainly a nice way to cap off my night. I love all your work but this one is one of your best. You have such a knack for taking an unusual pairing or situation and making it completely believable, in character, and incredibly enjoyable to read. And hot. Real Hot. Ninth Circle of Hell Hot.
person llyoung
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. That was absolutely fantastic. Your writing is so incredible. I just love your stories. Thank you so much for writing this for me. Shika and Kiba were fantastic. I loved the watching that Shika did and that Shika wasn't a "nameless" fuck to Kiba. Loved how Shika kept slowing Kiba down until Shika couldn't take it slow any more either.
And I also loved the mentions of Shino - the three of them together would be absolutely so hot. Thanks again for the wonderful present. You are such a fantastic and special person and I love your writing.