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Please don't abandon this!

I am loveing this story, the way you've written the characters is awesome and so far I'm really enjoying the plot. I really like I really like the part about kakashi's clan and how he adopts the boy that was awesome XD. I also think kakashi's and iruka's relationship is adorable :) 

I love the names sunshine and moonbeam so sweet. itachi should have one too.

That was a great new chapter although short^^ I really liked Kakashis insecurities and how Iruka helped him^^ Thanks a lot for the chapter and hope to see you soon!!!

i love your writing.

Great story cant wait to read chapter 12 and Iruka and Kakashis first date.
Oh a littlw idea for you when they start to get more seriius n their relationship you could have one of the younger two interrupt by having a nightmare or something. ;)

please update soon please thank you

Oh this chapter was great!!!! Sorry that it took me so long to review but I nedded to get reaquainted with your story^^ I still love it!!! I really like the cahnges both uchias show after the ritual especially sasuke^^ He is cute^^ And I really like how their training prosesses^^ Can#t wait for the date and the time skips after that^^ I'm really interessted how our sweet Hatake children will turn out after a few years^^ See you again soon!!!!

Hello! I'm reviewing on the first chapter but I have read what's written so far. I'll keep this simple. First, I'm sorry to hear you are having health problems (or at least we're at the time). I hope all will work out for you. Second, I wanted you to know I am sensitive to the fact that this is just fanfiction and real life is always more important. With that being said, the third on the list is me begging for you to please please please continue with this story. I love everything about it. I can't wait to see how Naruto's abilities grow, what happens with Itachi and Sasuke and what you plan to do to bring Neji and Naruto together (though I have my own theories about who they're thrown together). The pace of the story is fast but that is just as it should be. Konoha was flying by the seat of it's pants after the kyuubi attack and were sent reeling by the uchiha massacre. In short, I don't think the pace is inappropriate. If I saw any grammar or sentence structure errors they were of no hinderance to the story at all. I've been saying the following comment a lot in reviews lately but it is especially true for your story. I feel like I've picked up a published book when I read your story and I'm hoping real life will ease for you so can continue to write this story that obviously took a lot of thought to create. This story is wonderful and I hope to see it updated as soon as may be. ;-)

Luv this story plzzzzzzz continue it.