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for If Couches Could Talk

by Glenndolyn

person cantthnk
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your Naru/Iru stories. They are always so cute. So please Continue.
person Love to be Anon
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
::squeee:: No way! Any Iruka and Naruto story is good but this a hot, funny (I don't know if Naruto is stupid funny or just plan stupid) multichapter story! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!!!
person vashta
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I adore this pairing! There aren't enough of them, I'm thinking of writing my own! I think you've characterized them very well, it would probably run something like this in reality, well the reality of the manga world. Thanks!
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this one is strange in both pairing and style but good God I love it! I think my favorite part of all is: "...but that was before Naruto’s mouth was on his—sucking and pulling and biting and, good god, but who in the HELL had taught him to do that mouth-raping thing?! Iruka had to meet them and thank them, and then kill them for the good of other people’s modesty."

I must worship you for the awesomeness that is those lines. I about fell over.
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has to be the funniest, completely adorable, sexiest story I have read in a long time. The dialect between Naruto and Iruka is priceless. God-dame Naruto's hot!!!!! Please update again soon.
person NeonOranges
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Talking couch

...

I want one.
person Word_Slave
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! I'm sooooo glad you updated this. It's the perfect blend of hot and funny! And though it is kind of crack, I can totally see them acting this way
Slave

Please please update this again soon.
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
looking forward to the next chapter
person qwerty
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Iruka honestly felt bad. “It seemed like the right thing to do!”
“That is never the right thing to do!” the blond snapped back peevishly.
best line^^
person BennyPeace
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love you. I truly do.