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for A grain of truth

by himesamadakko

schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, Naru should stay with Neji!!!!!!! argh!!!!! Sasuke is a bastard! Neji is so kind and loving and he'll make Naru happy! waaaaaaaah i'm gonna cry if it turns out to be SasuNaru!!! I love NejiNaru waaaaaay more!!!
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww dammit, i cried!!!! it was such a touching fic, i just....waaaaaaaah crying again
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG Shuu do you know how bad my throat hurts from choking down tears. Then end was beautiful and I wanted to cry so bad but then everyone would know I am not as cold as I would like others to think. Why of course I will put you on my preferred readers. Your stories have such an elegance. Kami told me a while back she wouldn't be on until the day after Xmas sadly I was at work when she posted her update so I couldn't beta. But dammit I loved your story!
person gazelovr
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wwwaaaaaaaa!!! I'm bawling my eyes out!! I really wish you would have stopped at Yuuhi and Maria running from the reporters and getting married. I really, really didn't need to have the death. I know you said that Naruto wouldn't have been lonely but he was gone for a. whole. year. and he passed. all. alone. Not with his children or grandchild by his side at. all. *bawl, blows nose* Still a good story, but I really shouldn't have read it...oh, god, I can't stop crying!! I don't think I'll ever feel good again...*sniffle*...I need more tissues...I'm completely devestated...
person ladyrain
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love tour story I cried it was so good and so sad too. I am very happy to have read your story and I hope you can more too.
person LadyWolf
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shuu.....I love this fic!!! Neji is once jealous ass...but I still love him as well as the teme and dobe!!! The kids are friggin' adorable!!!!!!

I would love a happy ending....I would love to see Sasuke's wife get pregnant...that would be great!!!!
I'm a softy at heart.......*mumbling**yea just don't piss me off!!!

;o) can't wait to read more.......geezz I do intend to babble alot....well off to bed!!!!
person hi.i.ka
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story!!!! it's so unique and cute~~
but i have a question: why do you keep having hiashi referring to neji as his "niece"?? neji is male and should be hiashi's "nephew"....was that just a typo then?
but still, keep up the great work and upload lots quickly!!
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes... yes... i knew there was something wrong, when i proofread this, i just KNEW i missed something! i tend to mistake niece for a boy, sorry 'bout that. but it'd be a real pain to edit these chapters again... hn. now that i read it, those two can't get over the jealousy issues it seems... i suck.
person monrque
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story has seen enough saddd stuff. HAPPY ENDING HAPPY ENDING HAPPY ENDING HAPPY ENDING HAPPY ENDING ha ha ha ha ha !!!! lol.
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, Shuu!! Happy ending! I'm depressed enough as it is...Holiday depression and all...the last chapter made me feel a little better and I might be able to finish the 4th chapter...I know I promised to post it the weekend before...but real life and the Holiday funk got in the way...you know how it is! So, please! A happy ending...*puppy eyes*