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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG NO! I want a happy ending! Naru-chan has suffered soo much already I believe he deserves a nice ending!
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still think Sasuke and Naruto should be together! Well update soon!
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good I almost got scared that you were not gonna end with them together. I kinda wanted Sasuke to be happy with Naruto but the way portrayed Neji and him was beautiful. Oh and I hate the word delicious cause it just sounds NASTY >.<
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! I was reading until the wee hours of the night!!!!! I say it should be an epilouge with skip ahead a year, where naruto is maybe preggers again!!!! And maybe Sasuke will have found some happiness--ahhh...who cares!
It's all about NejiNaru!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sweet Fic!!!!!!!!!
It's all about NejiNaru!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sweet Fic!!!!!!!!!
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!! NejiNaru!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A grain of truth is really great!
I always loved sasu/naru/neji's love triangles. Though i'm a sasu/naru fangirls , you made a great neji/naru romance!
So that's why I would really like next chapter to be an epilogue (happy end) for neji/naru and their tribe (I don't see neji in an abusive husband's role? Though i know you can make it great) and maybe ask for a version B with naruto and sasuke together at the end? I would start version B around the time when neji finds naruto's drawing of sasuke, but naruto doesn't tear it... (you see my point? :-)
Again you're a great author and you don't get as many reviews as you should! just add sasu/naru in your summaries, make them more explicit and less enigmatic, or maybe just allow unregistered people to review!
You're a great (and prolific) writer so please continue!
I always loved sasu/naru/neji's love triangles. Though i'm a sasu/naru fangirls , you made a great neji/naru romance!
So that's why I would really like next chapter to be an epilogue (happy end) for neji/naru and their tribe (I don't see neji in an abusive husband's role? Though i know you can make it great) and maybe ask for a version B with naruto and sasuke together at the end? I would start version B around the time when neji finds naruto's drawing of sasuke, but naruto doesn't tear it... (you see my point? :-)
Again you're a great author and you don't get as many reviews as you should! just add sasu/naru in your summaries, make them more explicit and less enigmatic, or maybe just allow unregistered people to review!
You're a great (and prolific) writer so please continue!
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Naru should end up with Sasu-chan...even though Sasu has made mistakes he still loves his dobe!!! I think it would be better for Naru and the children if was with Sasu so I think you should make the chapters longer and add a lil abuse so that will get Naru running into Sasu arms...as much as I love Neji and Naru, I just think that this fic would end better if it was Sasu/Naru! Well that's just my suggestion! Hope to read more soon!!!
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully, I'll have chapter 4 of Family Portrait posted by Christmas! Make the next chapter the epilogue...make it happy and I'll try to post chapter four this weekend!! Please with sugar on top!
Kami
Kami
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapter 4 I hope Naruto ends up with Neji and the Uchiha bastard. I'm so nervice to read the rest incase he does go with the Uchiha.
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No No NO make them happy. I want more story make angst but don't have Naruto cheat.