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person sarge
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this story please update before the year ends or first week of january i really like to know whats gonna happen next and could you tell us the pairings in the next chapter
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well a nice chapter but I have to make a comment concerning the harem (at least for the girls Naruto and Sasuke share). I think that each of them would have certain girls that are off limits to the other (maybe 2 or 3 each, the others are shared though).

Anyways keep up the good work (by the way is Yugito still alive in your story or not).
person lmt8907
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice and it was funny
person lmt8907
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great 1st ch cant wait til the next one
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha i think it's hilarious! i really want to see were this is going! XD
person shadowii
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I busted a gut laughing after picturing the look on team seven's faces when Kakashi proposed his idea.

PrinceofPervs this sounds like a great story and please go on
person zeroharm
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just had to stop by after seeing this a few times on the update list.... could be interesting, but at the very least, it will be a very very very good example of crackficdom :-)
person Merchant
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great idea. Keep updating. I like it.
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
but, but i love naruto with anko and kurenai :( especially with anko ^_^. why can't he get with them too?

and i got to say this is the first time i have ever seen a story like this. can't wait to see what you got planned for it