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by TheUchihaRaven

schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love dialog as much as the next person, but this was way beyond loving it. This is a superbly written story that has tons of detail, depth, and heart to it. I am going to recommend this fic to any and all NarutoSasuke fans.

This is a brilliant piece of work.
person Luma
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jeese you had me thinking he was gonna die at first. You're evil. Dx But still loved cause he didn't.

This was absolutely fantastic and the way you wrote this was simply amazing. Feel honored that reading this actually won over my desperate need for sleep. No I'm kidding but still. I loved this.

Ja!
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I very much enjoyed that.
person shai69
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow like I said before great fic, I have to admit I'm glad the bastard didn't die though. If you do decide to make a sequel I will definitly be reading it. Great job at tugging on my heart strings :-)
person Luma
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say this quite excellent. I love everything you've done so far. The way you've portrayed them is simply amazing and I absolutely love it. I cannot wait to see more.
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story so far but what happened to the print?? It got light all the sudden and very uncomfortable to read. Other than that, I like this story.
person shai69
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gahhh, the suspence is killing me. Seriously though this is a good fic, I admit if Sasuke kills himself it will be sad but I will read it anyway because sometimes the best ones don't always have happy endings.
person Kimra
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay. I'm looking forward to reading more. :)