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for When in Venice

by Adi

person Gabby
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOH, how could u stop!!!???????????D: u'r soooo cruel!!!!!!!! ,meanie!!! well, can't wait 'till u update.... update sooooooooooooooooon!!! ONEGAAAAI!
person beautifullove348
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea where the story will turn next and that is what makes it sooo exctiting! Please update soon :)
person charmpit
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your stories make my recommended reading list so effortlessly, it seems.
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ADI, THAT WAS FANTASTIC!!!

I loved it honey! I'm so excited that Hina finally got you to update, cause I was loving this story. I loved the way you described Neji and Ino's kiss. Quality! And soo romantic *dreamy sigh* They're perfect for each other here :D And the boys reactions to each other in the airport, classic! I loved that Sasuke had a moment of panic for being unable to remember the exact shade of Naruto's eyes. lol.

Mmmm...masked balls, Venice and two very sexy boys hiding in the dark confines of an old, abandoned building is just setting itself up for HOTNESS!! XD

Can't wait for more!! MUAH!


person VRon8899
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-feeds- LOL....Always wanting more of this story! I will probably die from laughter if that isn't Naruto...-snickers- but if it is, still be funny >D
person ky0kichi
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're going to update this, right? The way they met, or rather..Haven't met 'yet' was nicely done..But now the anticipation is killing me. :(
person Kayo
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Where's the second/more part! I want more! ^__^ It's a good beginning, although I can't say much more about it yet. Except that the description of Sasuke and his apathy is memorable and vivid. And Sai! Ugh, Sai! But well done there, too; he feels very discordant next to Naruto. And the sentence how the world had gone on mute (or something like that) is my favorite (also very striking). *grin* Mild appreciation for the male anatomy, mmhmm. Hopefully that changes with Naruto. Anyways, this SasuNaruSasu fan is eagerly asking for More, please!
person Meshlena
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Me likes!!!! ^_^ add more!! lol
person kms
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I hope it comes out soon! This seems like it will be really great!
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. I am in love with this fic. Consider this a marriage proposal.
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