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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a great start to a story. You could go many different places with this, and I'll definitely be following to see which one you choose. From a writing standpoint I didn't see any obvious grammar mistakes, spelling errors, etc. All in all it looks to be a very good start to a story.
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not FAIR!!!*wails* This is one of the few stories I've been watching for an update and then all sudden it's at the top of the list and it looks like an update, but nooo! It's not. *is bitter for a bit*
Anyhow, it's a great story and it's just fun reading about Venice. I'm excited for Naruto and Sasuke to make contact and to see what you have planned. I like your writing style. I could probably say something else but I don't even have my glasses on yet and my eyes are getting irritated.
Have fun writing!
Anyhow, it's a great story and it's just fun reading about Venice. I'm excited for Naruto and Sasuke to make contact and to see what you have planned. I like your writing style. I could probably say something else but I don't even have my glasses on yet and my eyes are getting irritated.
Have fun writing!
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a great story. Only one thing is wrong, you haven't updated yet!! lol. NO really, you have a great writing style, and I can't wait for more.
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wanna know what happens next!
OMG They finally meet! Yay!
hope you'll update soon
I like your story;)!
OMG They finally meet! Yay!
hope you'll update soon
I like your story;)!
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! So would like to read more:)
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*raises hand* I like that Sai draws pictures of Naruto "sans penis". I feel as though I'm way more amused by that than I should be.
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Two hands up XD
That's totally sweet. I look forward to reading more.
That's totally sweet. I look forward to reading more.
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November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG Adi so that was just evil!!! LOL, you cut it off right at the good stuff *tackle glomps and molest/tickles* Write more NOW!!! XD, I like how you filled in the gaps, we get a much clearer image of Sasuke as a person, and of course get to meet more of the group. I really do hope you continue this soon. I have a really good feeling about it XD, LOL, and it's in Venice *fangirls*. Sorry I took so long to review, the story got lost on my desktop, I have so many tabs open in Firefox I'm surprised the program is still running.
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you can't end it there! that's just...just..rude! and evil. of COURSE we want more! so update right away. please? i'll cry if you don't. *gives best puppy eyes*
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please write more! It sounds so interesting right now! I want to see how naruto and Sasuke meet! Preety please continue writing!