schedule
November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Raising both arms!! Do feet count?
schedule
November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-raises both hands an a neighbors for extra luck-
schedule
November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I RAISE MY HAND! I RAISE MY HAND! Wow this story DEFINITELY caught my attention. It's so well written and original too. It has some humour moments, which I do enjoy. And the cliffhanger at the end killed me and brought me back to life at the same time. I love it ! I can already tell you have me hooked, line and sinker. Please, please update as soon as you can.
schedule
November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MOAR plz! ^_____^
schedule
November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really really like this. Like you said, it is different from your usual style but IMHO I think it's one of your best pieces to date. The flow and the descriptions were excellant, just enough to make you *feel* the characters and their surroundings. I could tell since I was completly surprised when the chapter ended. Thanks for posting this, can't wait for more!
schedule
November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*throws self at you*
schedule
November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*raises hand eagerly*
schedule
November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ADI!!! *glomps* you finished the first part!!!
I loved all the Naruto Sai interaction it was brilliant!!! I loved that even though there's a clearly a serious note in it you don't loose your flashes of humour. I still think the way you weave them in and out is really skillfully done and I think there's more detail in this one than in your other works which is making me see everything a lot more vividly so that's one of my favourite things about this fic too.
I love how what they're doing parallell each other's actions and journey as well, it had me waiting for that point where they would eventually meet in the same place and when they did and Naruto caught Sasuke watching him I got goosebumps.
So...
I want the next one >.<... NOW
XD lol joiking.
>.> no really. I want the next one.
Hina xXxx
I loved all the Naruto Sai interaction it was brilliant!!! I loved that even though there's a clearly a serious note in it you don't loose your flashes of humour. I still think the way you weave them in and out is really skillfully done and I think there's more detail in this one than in your other works which is making me see everything a lot more vividly so that's one of my favourite things about this fic too.
I love how what they're doing parallell each other's actions and journey as well, it had me waiting for that point where they would eventually meet in the same place and when they did and Naruto caught Sasuke watching him I got goosebumps.
So...
I want the next one >.<... NOW
XD lol joiking.
>.> no really. I want the next one.
Hina xXxx
schedule
November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-raises hand-
Seriously, that was really good. I want another chapter! xD
Seriously, that was really good. I want another chapter! xD
schedule
November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it times a zillion!!!
Showing you some well deserved loving here too!
Like Hina said, your Naruto Sai interaction is priceless. Love it! the anatomy line just kills me. Hee hee.
Ino is pretty fabulous in this too, or rather, Sasuke's pov of Ino. I laughed at the image of her sittin on the push cart at the airport on top of heaps of luggage. Just lol.
I definitely want more!
*raises hands and feet and grabs a friend and makes her raise hands and feet too for extra votes*
Showing you some well deserved loving here too!
Like Hina said, your Naruto Sai interaction is priceless. Love it! the anatomy line just kills me. Hee hee.
Ino is pretty fabulous in this too, or rather, Sasuke's pov of Ino. I laughed at the image of her sittin on the push cart at the airport on top of heaps of luggage. Just lol.
I definitely want more!
*raises hands and feet and grabs a friend and makes her raise hands and feet too for extra votes*