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by yaoiismyantidrug

schedule December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah there is Nothing more imberising then being caught with your pants down at your parents house by a younger sibling but it makes for a great tale years later
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, for the love of God, update this soon! This is the best Genma/Raidou I've ever read. Everyone else just assumes that the transition for them from friends to lovers would be easy, and would happen naturally. Like normal people wake up one morning and say, "Oh, I think I'm in love with my best friend and I never noticed, how silly of me." I'm thoroughly impressed with your take on it, you frame it perfectly. The underlying sense of desperation for things to be different and feelings of being helpless and unable to change things are what makes this story memorable; and then you throw in hot sex just for fun! Bravo!
person Hestia
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I added this to my recommended reading! And I realized I didn't but that Sasuke/Sai one on . . .

I loved A Tenuous Grasp, but the sequels were so sad . . .

Anyway, I love "Mess" and hence forth in terrible family dinners this will no doubt pop into my mind!
person Stinky Horowitz
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for more of these two. I love the utterly masterful portrayal of completely non-feminine men fucking. When I read your Gen/Rai stuff, I am convinced that these are deadly, athletic men who kill for money yet care for each other.
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this pairing, I love how you portray them, I love these stories... and I think I may be a Rai/Gen addict.
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know that you already know how much I love this, but I'm not sure I've mentioned how much I love the end... And Raidou's *first.* I love the way these two keep feeling their way (no pun intended) forward in this incredibly warm and sexy relationship.

I love your RaiGen so much. ^____^
person happyme
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it<3<3<3
person Julissis
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You made me read it again. And i still love it!

Your GenRai is made of awesome. ^__^