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for Snake eat Fox

by ElfenDream

person Jamie
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tell me Kiba's not dead that would be awful after Naruto just went through that he'd blow cause he had a promise that none of his friends would be hurt if he did as he was told oh maybe since Obito found him they'll let him become Obito's pet that would be some funny ass shit.

~Jamie
person brit
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that was..hot. Any fic that includes Gaara and Naruto is a turn on..there isn't that many of them out there y'know? GOd I worship your lemon writing...ness. Very hot and graphic! Love it when the semes are in total control.

lolz I find it mas hilarious when Naruto was portraying Itachi when he was doing the hand signs. xD funny.

Great job on the story and update when you can yah? ^_^
person qwerty
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Argh Kiba! Why did you think you could take on the Snakes yourself?
update
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO, what tha hell!! is Naruto turning into a slut!!! Will he forgive Itachi
for letting his people use him like that??( I know u said it's tradition, but still!!)
And what will Naruto do now when he sees Kiba on the floor??
O my goodness, aaah, I wanna see Itachi suffer!!! Make him suffer!! and then let Naruto mend his
pathetic heart!! ( evil laugh*) I mean come on!!! I know this is your fic!! But please, I wanna se Itachi suffer, even a little bit!!

Keep up the good work!!! UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh YES! This fic is awesome! I am SOOOOO HOOKED! Please update more soon!
person lonelylulaby
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was intense. I guess Naruto is right about Kiba getting him in trouble, whenever he's involved Naruto seems to get severly punished. I can't wait till the next chapter when the gang comes to *torment* him.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
person shadowphoenix143
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Itachi sure messed with Naruto's head! Have to admit it was hot though in a tortured sort of way. Naruto shouldn't blame Kiba though, he should never have answered the phone in the first place. It was defiantly NOT an appropriate time.
Great chapter!
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
even after double checking this chapter for any mistakes I might of missed, I still finded them. Damn *Cry*
Oh well, live and learn. Love the chapters as always, it's a great story ^_^
Eloradanin
person dragonslayer496
schedule February 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE ITA/SASU/NARU MORE ITA/SASU/NARU!!!!! UCHICEST UCHICEST
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow hehe can't wait to see what happens when itachi brings naru to meet the gang :P, also hope to see more ita/naru/sasu threeways or even just sasu/naru lol please update soon ;P