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for Snake eat Fox

by ElfenDream

person tash1021
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
paramedic: hurry she's suffering from blood lose cause by a great yaoi lemon.
tash_1021: @____@ **drool--
Paramedic: we're losing her
other paramedic: **picks up paddles** CLEAR!!!
person mls
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the excellent work!!!!!!!
person Outlaw Ange;
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAH, don't let Naru-chan suffer toooo much, maybe let Itachi-san suffer!!, he is a big meanie!!
Controling Naru-chan like that, maybe Naru-chan needs to, wel somehow get sick and won't talk to Itachi-san
till he's free or dead!! Don't make Naru-chan into a slu*, that will be soo wrong, I mean Naru is like the
coolest ever, hey may be a dobe, but he has a good head on his shoulder, somehow he will get out of this mess!!

Update as soon as you can, cause ur story is tha bomb!!
Ya ne!!
person qwerty
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Can't wait for Naruto to meet the gang. This chapter is amazing.
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schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOMG the unholy trinity <3 i can't help but want sasuke to get in on it every time i read ita/naru....

mmmmm, hope you update again soon !!
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I am so sorry I didn't know that Gaara was taken by Kakashi until I read your note and checked on your profile. I haven't read your other fic yet but I put it in my to do list. I see you went ahead with the Shino/Kiba pairing anyway that is good because after reading the last chapter it was definitely my first choice for Kiba. Hmmm so Kiba is jealous that Naruto got a hot guy and so he went and threw himself of Shino, haha, lol. I am actual happy about this because within this past week I read like 3 or 4 fanfiction with Kiba protesting that he is not gay and you know what they say thou doesth protest too much. It is ironic that Shino is the one who did the thing to Sakura and Kiba fucked him. I noticed they didn't exchange numbers at the end, which means either it was a no go or you are planning on having them meet up again. Either way I hope you ship this pairing all the way.

And Itachi is very possesive, what he did to Sakura was cruel I mean bugs eating her body wow, she is probably so fucked up now she's wishing for death, even if they didn't kill her. Something tells me that she will probably end up dead before this fic is over. Not that I am complaining by the way, as long as Itachi and Naruto are straight that is really all I care about. And speaking of them, he called him baby, while I am sure it was probably just to please him so he'd wouldn't kill Sakura I liked it nonetheless. And Naru topped Sas-kun, at first I was like what Sasuke get out of their bed and then I was like Hot! Anyways enough yapping, loved this chappie especially Kiba's slut ass and looking forward to the next one.
person Qiana
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So good but more ItaNaru please
person Ivy
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Shino/Kiba!!! It would be awesome if you did a side story focused on them... anyways your story just keeps getting better and better ^_^ I want to see pairings for all the snakes, but I guess thats greedy :-) Anyways fantastic work as always!
person mls
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work. loved shino\kiba i hope you have more of it in this story!!!!!
person qwerty
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
shino/kiba action was hot. good chapter
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