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for Snake eat Fox

by ElfenDream

person lonelylulaby
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really liked the added chapters. I feel kinda bad for Sakura, she is being the victim even though she has no idea of the game. Poor Naruto signing his life away just to save Sakura from being eaten alibe by bugs. Also being anally fucked by 2 guys sounds kinda painfull ^_^ I wonder what else Itachi has instore for his little kitsune.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mwhahaha that was great!
Wow was not expecting Sakura, and i was wondering what the look on Kiba's face meant
Though poor naruto ... well maybe not, he now has Itachi ^__^
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha that was great!
Wow i almost forgot about Shino and his bugs ... good thing Gaara didn't do something
person Jien
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG you just satisfied my ItaSasuNaru craving I have been having for long now... I just can't seem to find any good fics for that threesome, but yay I found this.

Its so good and so hot. Plus a sadistic, evil Itachi is always a nice thing to have. Although I do feel bad for Naruto, and being the Sakura fan I am I feel kinda bad for her. Oh well as long as Naruto has those two hot ravens I Don't care.

Anyways loved it and I really can't wait to read more. Update soon please.

-Akiru-
person Ivy
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as usual!!!
person bloody_rose500
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off I like to say wow. I have never read such a gory story in fanfic. I think ur doing an amazing job. Just when I feel like Naruto is safe and going to be happy oooo something bad happens. The last thing with a Sakura and the bugs eating her insides eeeee…oooo had me itching and scratching. I hope Sakura will be ok even if I don’t like her.
person mls
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person qwerty
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*shudders* Ugh, bugs crawling inside of you.... gross. Great chapter.
update
person tash1021
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
**sits on top of a mountain of blood soak tissues while holding another to her nose**
oh wow i knew there were brothers that shared everything but....wow
oh by the way i was think about your story and i thought of a bunch of ways that itachi and sasuke can *punish* (^.-) naruto or going agaist their orders.
if your intrested hers my e-mail

tash_1021@hotmail.com