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for Snake eat Fox

by ElfenDream

person Ivy
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as usual!!! Loved the threesome...so sexy :) Anyways look foward to an update!
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man the things Naru does to protect Sakura. Although now with her thinking he is gay she won't come near him anymore so it kind of worked out in the end. You should do some Gaara/Kiba since he is so upset he didn't get any. I love how Itachi and Naru get along. We haven't really seen much of Itachi and the Snakes outside of when he is at home with Naru, but he treats Naruto pretty okay under the circumstances. Even if he didn't answer the question about what Naruto is to him. And wow the threesome was so hot, I'm not a big fan of Ita/Sasu/Naru because it always seems more like Ita/Sasu which I hate, but you definitely got me with this one. Maybe next time you could do some Gaara/Kiba.
person tash1021
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
?_? is naruto sasuke pet to?
*faints due to hotness and blood loss cause by nose bleed*
person Jien
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want some lemon! Update soon!!
person mls
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Ivy
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story rocks!!! It has some of the hottest lemons :) and it actually has a plot, too. Hope you decide to keep updating.
person Jamie
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Please go ahead and feel free to kill Sakura if thats one of your thoughts or maybe set her up with Sasuke see what Itachi does about that.
person alia d
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome story, really intense, cant wait for more.
person qwerty
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
update
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm back from my vacation!

I read the three chapters I missed while I was away, they were awesome as usual. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Naru-chan he is so lost and heart broken. He's in love with Sakura, but he loves Itachi's hot body! ;P Decisions, decisions... well actually Naruto doesn't seem to have a choice in the matter, but you get what I mean. ;)

I can't wait for more.
=)