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Your story is awesome, I looke forward to read the next chapters! So many things could happen! I'm intrigued!

Oh wow!You really have got a talent for writing. I felt I was reading a book and didn't want to stop. Then came the end of chapter 3. I almost cried. Damn I want to read more :) I really like the storyline. Very original. A lot of background information about the whole snake thing, very cool. You really thought this one out. Your first chapter scared me to death!! It reminded me so much of the ring. My god, that movie and your chapter where so scary! I really hope you make this story nice and long and up date a lot. Your story is the first I have ever given such a review to. Btw: I love the fact that Naruto made that nest from pillows. I think I would have done the same. But what I don't understand is why Naruto doesn't tell his friends. Do 'the snakes' check his calls and check what he is talking about? And one last thing. You didn't really explain what Naruto had to do for that organisation. Later we found out that is was dumping Sakura (poor girl!) and start living with Itachi. But it is just a tip. It's late here so maybe I missed the part where you wrote that. Anyway: Keep going! You have so much talent, I love your idea and you really keep the reactions of the characters like they should be.

oooh! very promising fic! ^^ i love how you made your itachi and naruto! update soon please!

I really don't read Itanaru stories at all, but this one caught my eye. At first I though it was Sasuke, but when I found out it was Itachi I thought what the heck and kept reading. I'm glad I did, it's great so far. Can't wait to read more, update as soon as you can :)!

That fic is awesome I really like it!! It's peculiar and I love it!

Keep up the good work!!

Awesome story. I just read it all now. Can't wait for more.
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I like your story. I don't think the 3rd chapter is too long. I Look forward to reading the next chapter ^_^ Update soon please

ohhhh, this is goood. Me like.

Also I love that last chapter size :P

I can't wait for more!!

enjoyed it ...i LOVED IT ^.^
i can't wait for the next update

I'm looking forward to you continuing this- Wonderful start-