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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....Grrr!!! *gets out toaster and VERY long plug-in cord, drops it in the water* BWHAHAHAHAHAHA~!!! Goddamn that was just plain evil! Killing poor Naru like that! And everyone ended up sad! ...Ok you got good points for planning (hinting) that Kiba's going to die (don't know why but I've never like'd him...which is weird; I love dogs! XD) but still...every-one's miserable and Gaara just had a 15min fame in the whole thing...boo *is pouting*. But altogether this was a very...entertaining...read ^_~!
~Miss War-chan :D
~Miss War-chan :D
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack! I was waiting for some trick ending but, damn, Sasuke really did kill Naruto. So sad *tear*
Any alternate ending in the future? You could write that the bullet was really an indication of some fight going on elsewhere in the house. In the process of defending both Naruto and Sasuke from some random evil enemy the Uchihas have, Itachi realizes that he truly loves both Naruto and Sasuke and was an IDIOT to consider of leaving Sasuke for Naruto. Thus, the happy triad continues! YAY!!!
Please do an alternate ending. I really don't like the happy sunshine gone!
Though I did like how you hinted at the Uchihas messing around with Kiba in the near future. That was a good twist at the end.
Awesome story! I loved every bit of it!!! GREAT JOB!!!
(Do an alternate ending s'il vous plait!)
Any alternate ending in the future? You could write that the bullet was really an indication of some fight going on elsewhere in the house. In the process of defending both Naruto and Sasuke from some random evil enemy the Uchihas have, Itachi realizes that he truly loves both Naruto and Sasuke and was an IDIOT to consider of leaving Sasuke for Naruto. Thus, the happy triad continues! YAY!!!
Please do an alternate ending. I really don't like the happy sunshine gone!
Though I did like how you hinted at the Uchihas messing around with Kiba in the near future. That was a good twist at the end.
Awesome story! I loved every bit of it!!! GREAT JOB!!!
(Do an alternate ending s'il vous plait!)
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
u should make a sequal were naruto some how comes back and looking for payback (heheheh) *evil lagh* loved the story
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN YOU! I CAN'T BEILIEVE YOU KILLED NARUTO OFF!*CRIES* I WANTED A HAPPY ENDING WITH ALL THREE OF THEM TOGETHER! I HATE YOU FOR THIS!
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! i was not expecting that!!! although i hate that my little fox was killed-- i have to admit i could not think of a better ending than that! it was absolutely brilliant! XD cant wait to see what brilliant story you write next!!! X3 XOXOXOXOXOXOOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOOXOXOXOX
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was so hot! I read all the chapters in one sitting. . . I need a cold shower right about now.
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really liked how this ended. Very bittersweet and it brought a twisted smile to my face at the end. Poor Kiba...
Anyways... I find myself wanting to hate Sasuke, but I just can't. What he did was perfectly logical in my mind. It was something Sasuke did in the heat of things without thinking of what would happen later.
I feel bad for them both... but I don't think I would have liked it to end any other way.
I hope you write something like this again... well with the ItaSasuNaru pairing... It's so hard to find good fics for it anymore.
Love ya, you're awesome.
-Akiru-
Anyways... I find myself wanting to hate Sasuke, but I just can't. What he did was perfectly logical in my mind. It was something Sasuke did in the heat of things without thinking of what would happen later.
I feel bad for them both... but I don't think I would have liked it to end any other way.
I hope you write something like this again... well with the ItaSasuNaru pairing... It's so hard to find good fics for it anymore.
Love ya, you're awesome.
-Akiru-
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way you ended it. I think it suited the story very well.Great story i really enjoyed it.
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O!
you know? I like it... and I'm not saying it because I feel like I have to, no, I really like it...
it is funny actually (I have to be honest) because I'm eating right now, so when I was reading that Naruto was dead I was about to get a bite... so my chicken leg stoped mid air when I thought: She killed him!!! SHE KILLED HIM!!! hahaha I'm so weird sometimes LOL
It is angsty, but thank god not THAT angsty of course I like corny endings but I cas see now why you were saying you had this end since the beggining... it fits (in my opinion)
I'm still thinking about it, so I don't have anything smart to say, but congrats for finishing your fic!!! .:kiss:. it is a great job you did :D .:throws conffetti:.
you know? I like it... and I'm not saying it because I feel like I have to, no, I really like it...
it is funny actually (I have to be honest) because I'm eating right now, so when I was reading that Naruto was dead I was about to get a bite... so my chicken leg stoped mid air when I thought: She killed him!!! SHE KILLED HIM!!! hahaha I'm so weird sometimes LOL
It is angsty, but thank god not THAT angsty of course I like corny endings but I cas see now why you were saying you had this end since the beggining... it fits (in my opinion)
I'm still thinking about it, so I don't have anything smart to say, but congrats for finishing your fic!!! .:kiss:. it is a great job you did :D .:throws conffetti:.
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August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, that was kinda ... ummm predictable some? but still, interesting ending. hey if you do an alternate, maybe have sasuke suicide so itachi feels guilty? or maybe naruto survived the hit somehow and escapes to a new life? or maybe he ends up being immortal and living life somewhere else?
it just doesn't seem right to have the uchihas lusting after kiba. i dunno it just seems wrong. ;-) i always wondered, what was naruto's life like before? maybe you could do a story about that and how itachi was stalking him before pouncing?
thanks for finishing this up .. it's been a ride!
it just doesn't seem right to have the uchihas lusting after kiba. i dunno it just seems wrong. ;-) i always wondered, what was naruto's life like before? maybe you could do a story about that and how itachi was stalking him before pouncing?
thanks for finishing this up .. it's been a ride!