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poor baby. it'll all be worth it in the end... hopefully

damnit u really luv ur cliffhangers grrrr, please update soon, i soooo can't wait to see that little lemon u spoke of hehe, please hurry :P

really hot into leaves you wanting more it great
i didn't like instead of cutting the story off when he read the instructions you have the lyrics to the song play (but cutting off right before he read the instructions is a great cliffy)
but thats just me
keep going

I'm always amazed by all these authors who write these fantastic little pieces, then admit that English isn't their first language. What. The. Hell. O_O

You people have a greater understanding of the English language than most of my fellow Americans, whom I know for a fact can't string a sentence together for shit. >_<


You guys are making us look bad. lol. Keep up the good work! :D Nice intro chapter. ^^

Eep!! :s i take it ur a fan of the Saw movies lol, well besides the gore i liked the first chapter, can't wait to see what they want from lil naruto ,hopefully some yaoi coming up, and the only spelling mistake that annoyed me was when u tried to spell 'example' no 'c' or 's' required, please update soon :P