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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thought my wife had abandoned me. It's good to know that you are still alive and writing ^_^ I missed you *hugs* Great smutty chap. Terrifying ending. I think i'm afraid to know what happens next.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How could you end it like that! The last chapter...so mean yet so good at the same time! You must up date soon...real soon!...
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHH!!! fine not pure evil, but quasi evil and my heart is still racing. well now i need to calm down and it's your fault...
i can't wait for the last part and the one shots (if you decide to do that). your story kicks ass.
Happy Writing!!!!!
i can't wait for the last part and the one shots (if you decide to do that). your story kicks ass.
Happy Writing!!!!!
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love love your story very much please update soon.
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* How come only the people at Y gal! get molested? Oh well I guess I have to review there from my account to get molested too, lol! Although that means I would have to remember the password *sighs again*
And you know the thing I hate the most about aff.net, its not being able to get alerts for new chapters and stories, because I swear you must have at least a hundred hits from me alone, I checked in everyday just to see if there was a new chapter posted. But you know thats because I like this fic.
Okay so now on to my actual review. I must say you definitely started this chapter with a bang with Itachi getting pissed off and Sasuke, and even though Sasuke's been an ass throughout this whole fic to Naruto and a very small part of me wants to hate Itachi for treating him that way, I really can't when you think about it. I mean how can you be mad at Itachi for wanting Naruto's love all to himself, its kind of sweet in a twisted sort of way. But then again this is Itachi we are talking about, so that right there is sort of a love confession or testament of his feelings towards Naru-chan.
I thought it was crazy and smart that Itachi didn't have sex with him in the real world, only in the jutsu, it was like his idea of closure. And the lemon was cool too, it was like Sasuke knew this would be the last time and so he seemed more desperate and emotional than usual (which is saying a lot, lol)! Loved the way this ended and from your A/N at the end I take it Itachi made Naruto immortal so he doesn't die when Sasuke shoots him; if it does happen I look forward to it.
On another note Naruto pissed me off so much here, when Sasuke and Itachi were having their conversation it made me realize that after all the stuff that Sasuke has done (like him being the one to tell Itachi that Naruto called Sakura) Naruto is so blind to him. Even in the end he wondered whether Itachi had raped Sasuke, I'm like as much as Sasuke spreads his legs for Itachi like Itachi would ever rape him, Sasuke would like it too much. So either Naruto is just really naive or Sasuke is just really cunning. Maybe now with Naruto getting shot he would realize that maybe all is not what is seems in that regards.
Besides all that I am happy to see a oneshot series coming from this, it just means more goodness. Do I have any request or anything, hmmm not really though you know I've been dying to see more Kiba, preferably with Naruto and Itachi or just Itachi, heck he doesn't even have to be screwing anybody as long as you put him in there somewhere, I loved his personality in this. And maybe some dress up with Naruto, spanking, sex in public, Naruto masturbating to Itachi screwing somebody would be nice, anal beads, role play, etc, etc.
And you know the thing I hate the most about aff.net, its not being able to get alerts for new chapters and stories, because I swear you must have at least a hundred hits from me alone, I checked in everyday just to see if there was a new chapter posted. But you know thats because I like this fic.
Okay so now on to my actual review. I must say you definitely started this chapter with a bang with Itachi getting pissed off and Sasuke, and even though Sasuke's been an ass throughout this whole fic to Naruto and a very small part of me wants to hate Itachi for treating him that way, I really can't when you think about it. I mean how can you be mad at Itachi for wanting Naruto's love all to himself, its kind of sweet in a twisted sort of way. But then again this is Itachi we are talking about, so that right there is sort of a love confession or testament of his feelings towards Naru-chan.
I thought it was crazy and smart that Itachi didn't have sex with him in the real world, only in the jutsu, it was like his idea of closure. And the lemon was cool too, it was like Sasuke knew this would be the last time and so he seemed more desperate and emotional than usual (which is saying a lot, lol)! Loved the way this ended and from your A/N at the end I take it Itachi made Naruto immortal so he doesn't die when Sasuke shoots him; if it does happen I look forward to it.
On another note Naruto pissed me off so much here, when Sasuke and Itachi were having their conversation it made me realize that after all the stuff that Sasuke has done (like him being the one to tell Itachi that Naruto called Sakura) Naruto is so blind to him. Even in the end he wondered whether Itachi had raped Sasuke, I'm like as much as Sasuke spreads his legs for Itachi like Itachi would ever rape him, Sasuke would like it too much. So either Naruto is just really naive or Sasuke is just really cunning. Maybe now with Naruto getting shot he would realize that maybe all is not what is seems in that regards.
Besides all that I am happy to see a oneshot series coming from this, it just means more goodness. Do I have any request or anything, hmmm not really though you know I've been dying to see more Kiba, preferably with Naruto and Itachi or just Itachi, heck he doesn't even have to be screwing anybody as long as you put him in there somewhere, I loved his personality in this. And maybe some dress up with Naruto, spanking, sex in public, Naruto masturbating to Itachi screwing somebody would be nice, anal beads, role play, etc, etc.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked the chapter!
yes, of course I have to admit that I'm waiting for the epilogue as if this was the end would seem a little rushed, but actually I like it, is easier to want/hope of an "everybody lived happily ever after" but I also see this one pausible as these boys are used to suffer... and is not like they couldn't be happy, but they may not believe they are worthy...
even though, I'm waiting too see how the next chapter comes...
.:hugs:.
yes, of course I have to admit that I'm waiting for the epilogue as if this was the end would seem a little rushed, but actually I like it, is easier to want/hope of an "everybody lived happily ever after" but I also see this one pausible as these boys are used to suffer... and is not like they couldn't be happy, but they may not believe they are worthy...
even though, I'm waiting too see how the next chapter comes...
.:hugs:.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I really love it. I can't wait to read more.
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! you are evil!!!!!!!!! Super cliff hanger!! really wonder how you are going to wrap this up. ^^
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July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG... Wow... just wow. I think I love you.
I love endings like this. It was just so cruel and sadistic yet with a hint of sadness and love.
I can't help but feel bad for the three of them. Neither of them are getting what they wanted in the end... Itachi will never have Naruto fully ((that is if he was shot and does not die)), Sasuke will never have Itachi mind, body, and soul... and Naruto, he will never have his normal life back again.
Sasuke though is who really made me smile. I can see him pulling out a gun on Naruto just to get his way, more or less... makes him sound like a spoiled child when I say it like that, but I think it safe to say that the love he felt for his brother was an unhealthy obsession.
Although there is something that is nagging me that Sasuke could of shot Itachi... although I forget if something like that could actually kill him. I don't know... just seems like Sasuke would be more satisfied to kill Itachi and take Naruto from him, then kill Naruto and live with Itachi hating you, and never being able to touch and just look upon him from afar...
I don't know though... oh well... I really can't wait for the epilogue... update soon please!
-Akiru-
I love endings like this. It was just so cruel and sadistic yet with a hint of sadness and love.
I can't help but feel bad for the three of them. Neither of them are getting what they wanted in the end... Itachi will never have Naruto fully ((that is if he was shot and does not die)), Sasuke will never have Itachi mind, body, and soul... and Naruto, he will never have his normal life back again.
Sasuke though is who really made me smile. I can see him pulling out a gun on Naruto just to get his way, more or less... makes him sound like a spoiled child when I say it like that, but I think it safe to say that the love he felt for his brother was an unhealthy obsession.
Although there is something that is nagging me that Sasuke could of shot Itachi... although I forget if something like that could actually kill him. I don't know... just seems like Sasuke would be more satisfied to kill Itachi and take Naruto from him, then kill Naruto and live with Itachi hating you, and never being able to touch and just look upon him from afar...
I don't know though... oh well... I really can't wait for the epilogue... update soon please!
-Akiru-
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July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy crap on a stick! that has got to be one of the best cliffies ever!!! not to date myself, but didn't the tv show "dallas" have something like this? arent reruns great? (ahem1)
anyway, if itachi is immortal, then did sasuke try to kill naruto? arghh!!! i don't usually beg for a quick update, but puhleeeeeeeeeeeease give us the ending soon. here's some cookies and mountain dew to jumpstart yoru muse. ;-)
anyway, if itachi is immortal, then did sasuke try to kill naruto? arghh!!! i don't usually beg for a quick update, but puhleeeeeeeeeeeease give us the ending soon. here's some cookies and mountain dew to jumpstart yoru muse. ;-)