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Why would you freaking do that???!
That was the most evil cliffie ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Holy Shit that was crazy!
I feel so much for Sasuke during this chapter. But if he killed Naruto... which he probably (hopefully) didn't because he was beginning to love Naruto....
Argh!
UPDATE!!!!!

Please don't kill Itachi or Naruto, please!!!! Don't let neither of them get killed.
I know that Sasuke must have shot his brother or Naruto, and I'd really hate it if any of them would have died.
So please, I'm begging you don't kill them. Do this for the ItaNaru-fans, please!
I really love this fic, it's one of my favorite, you are the master of lemons, cause I haven't read a fic yet that has as good and juicy lemons as you have.
So keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Please update soon cause I can't wait for the next chapter.
Take care. Hugs

geez!!! that was so freaking amazing!! seriously how do you come up with this-- this has to be the hottest story i ever read!! plus it actually has a good plot-- i admit i got a little teary when sasuke and itachi had that little chat.... please update soon! i cannot wait to see what happens!!! XOXOXOXX

No words, no words****huggs legs rocking back an forth*********Until next chapter.

Kaaaah I am so freaking upset at you *sticks tongue out*, lol! I really was hoping this would end on an ItaNaru note just liked it started, not that Sasuke would be out of the picture but with all the SasuNaru -ness and Sasuke's feelings toward the whole ItaNaru thing and the ItaNaruSasu-ness that has been focused on in the more recent chapters I figured since the relationship started out on a funny note between Itachi and Naruto why not end on a happy(romantic) note between the two, but you have steered off from that direction. *Pouts* Okay so now time for the actual review part.

This is for chappies 18 and 19. You know at the beginning of 18 when Sasuke was reading the note I really, really thought he was going to go psycho and hurt Naruto. You said that you revised it like four times so that might be it 'cause it really did seem like the setup for this chapter. In my head I was going oh shit, oh shit like a mantra. I am happy that Naruto didn't get hurt. The conversation between them was so.... sappy it was like ewww, as much as I hate to say it I like emo bitch Sasuke better. So all in all for that chapter I'd have to say that the lemon was hot I loves a slutty Sasuke, but its like he spent 17 1/2 chapters hating Naruto and all of a sudden bam they are buddy buddy. It wasn't necessarily bad it was just so wierd because it came out of nowhere.In regards to 19, ohmigod what have you done with 'Tachi!!! O_o for this I seriously laughed my ass off, and throughout the whole thing I kept thinking what the heck did she do to 'Tachi 'Tachi! Well now that Sasuke has his kicks, because the whole screwing Itachi thing really was for him and his ego, not Naruto I hope 'Tachi goes back to being 'Tachi and redeems himself.

I must say though that in chapter 18, Sasuke and Naruto were like 'we're gonna make Itachi love both of us' and I was thinking it really doesn't work that way you can't make someone love you. Really the kind of relationship or whatever that Naruto was proposing is really just the one they have now. Its not that they didn't include Sasuke in things, technically there has been only one chapter since Sasuke came in the picture that didn't include him in it with them. So we still have that triangle, Sasuke loves Itachi, Itachi loves Naruto, Naruto loves both; he is still the glue holding them together. And while we are on the subject I will be upset at you again *sticks tongue out, again* *snickers* if all of a sudden between now and the end Itachi miraculously loves Sasuke. Also Itachi and Naruto still haven't settled their issues, after Sakura's death Naruto chose to ignore them instead of face them so I hope that works out with them too. So yeah that is pretty much it, another one of my long ass reviews this time covering two chapters. See you next chappie!

P.S So are you doing another story after this one?????

heylo!! remember me form y gallery?

thought i'd leave a review since i do love narusasu so much. hehe. awesome chapter. sasuke finally opened up and let Naruto make him feel better... *giggle* loved it~

oh sweetheart that was delicious!!! and i really cant wait to see how Itachi gets back at the both of them *evil laugh* they really are sooo dead.

but i noticed a typo here : "are you coming with us to play outoto...or are you content jerking off...all alone here. While me and your little pet play a little game in the bedroom?"

Sasuke says this right? otouto means little brother in japanese so it would be weird if he said that to Itachi. Aniki means elder brother, so that would fit.

update soon ~

I'm sooooo sorry i haven't been able to read your fic for a while. *glomps* Gomen!!
The last few chapters were EXTREEMLY hot!!! *blows kisses*
Can't wait to find out what Itachi will do with the two devils XD XD

haha nice itachi. i hope u wont get too mad. atleast it was something different.. right? and sasuke is fine now, im so glad :D go sasuke!


thank you very much for the update :)

*drooled to death*...