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for Snake eat Fox

by ElfenDream

schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha! They are screwed when Itachi finds out...and probably literally! Thanks for updating!
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh theyre gonna get it!!! but it was definately worth it! XD i have been waiting for this one! X3 that was so0o0o0o0o freakin' amazing!!- i think i might just have to read it again! i seriously love you for writing this! honestly this is one of the best stories ive read in quite a while! keep up the fantastic writing- cant wait to see what your talented mind will come up with next!! *kiss kiss
person mrk33
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They are dead in the morning. I am looking forward to the punishment.
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your wife is back from the brink of death! Annie is now off of 4 of 5 prescriptions. YAY!!! Lovely chapter. I would have never thought to put that scenerio into action. Hot hot hot hot HOT!!!!! I luf yuu!!!!
person Yaoifan!!
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Itachi is going to punish them both for this...indiscretion....heheheh!!
person mls1971
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lloved this chapter!!!! i hope you do more of itachi in the middle again!!!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!! keep up the great work!!!! this is mls!!!
person qwerty
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They are so dead.
Awesome chapter. Loved it! Very hott!
update!
person animelover
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DUUUUUUUUUUUUDE!! r u kidding? man that some revenge, and you need to update like yesterday, 'cause i wanna see the payback itachi is going to give our boys.

pretty sneaky, but maybe itachi won't be too mad .... hmmm, but then again! LOL!
schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeay! I'm here too XD

They are in so much trouble tomorrow! but it was worthy...
.:giggles:. and I can't wait to see how are they gonna get punished

.:drools:.
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
[Fans face] Wow, that was amazing...The chapters for this story are nice and long and have I mentioned that you are such an amazing writer...I feel like I should offer you a cigerette after that session; kinda like in a romantic comedy [shakes head] but that's besides the point. All I can say is...Wow.

I'm so going to have to keep an eye out for this fic in the future ^.~