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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, will Naruto find out the truth? I mean Itachi had lied to him in his face.
I would let Itachi suffer for making Naruto lose Sakura and his friends, I mean, obsessed much?
I can't beleive Itachi would lie to Naruto when he has feelings for him. And Sasuke...let him suffer to.
'Cause even though his brother warned him of not telling Naruto, he should have told him.
LET ITACHI AND SASUKE SUFFER GREATLY FOR THEIR WRONG DOING WITH NARUTO.
Let Naruto make them suffer, and Naruto should go into hiding and find secret power (the Kyuubi)
Itachi has do apoligize to Naruto, because he can't live without him, but please let the UCHIHA'S SUFFER!!! THEY DESERVE TO FEEL THE PAIN NARUTO HAD FELT WHEN HE LOST SAKURA!!!
You can do it!!!
You work is superb!!!
PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!
YA NE ^_^
I would let Itachi suffer for making Naruto lose Sakura and his friends, I mean, obsessed much?
I can't beleive Itachi would lie to Naruto when he has feelings for him. And Sasuke...let him suffer to.
'Cause even though his brother warned him of not telling Naruto, he should have told him.
LET ITACHI AND SASUKE SUFFER GREATLY FOR THEIR WRONG DOING WITH NARUTO.
Let Naruto make them suffer, and Naruto should go into hiding and find secret power (the Kyuubi)
Itachi has do apoligize to Naruto, because he can't live without him, but please let the UCHIHA'S SUFFER!!! THEY DESERVE TO FEEL THE PAIN NARUTO HAD FELT WHEN HE LOST SAKURA!!!
You can do it!!!
You work is superb!!!
PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!
YA NE ^_^
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know I first read this chapter on the day that you posted it but I wasn't sure how I felt about so I decided to wait and comment, I am not sure if that is a good thing or bad thing.
So I like the fact that Naruto got to relieve some of his anger by beating up Itachi but I am upset at the fact that Itachi is still lying to him. I would at least expected him to be honest. And then they are like its all about Naruto's suffering right now, but yet they are the ones that caused it. Itachi wants to make Naruto immortal, against his will I might add but Itachi doesn't deserve him, he supposedly loves him but yet is constantly manipulating him. He is a really selfish person. Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke... hmm I really hope that when this story ends it ends on a ItaNaru note, for real I really don't think Sasuke should be getting any sex or loving from Naruto especially being that he hates him. I think for that reason, at least in my opinion the whole ItaNaruSasu thing has gotten wierd, its not the same anymore. Before it was just hot but now its like everytime there is a smex scene with Naruto and Sasuke involved I keep on thinking about how much he hates Naruto. Although the one thing that I was really happy with about this chapter was the fact Sasuke's plan to separate them didn't work. But he's immortal so I guess we can't kill him off, too bad! And lol, you must really hate Naruto, its like you wake up in the morning going I think I am going to make Naruto suffer again in my next chapter. Just joking! But really Naruto just can't seem to get a break with you, which oddly enough seems pretty amusing.
On a happier note is Kiba coming back, I missed him. I swear they should have kicked Sasuke out for a housemate and brung in Kiba, definitely would have been some good times then. Oh and thanks for reminding me when mentioning how harsh Sakura's death was I totally forgot about Lee, poor Lee I am so sorry I actually like you as a character. So aah.... r.i.p I guess.
So I like the fact that Naruto got to relieve some of his anger by beating up Itachi but I am upset at the fact that Itachi is still lying to him. I would at least expected him to be honest. And then they are like its all about Naruto's suffering right now, but yet they are the ones that caused it. Itachi wants to make Naruto immortal, against his will I might add but Itachi doesn't deserve him, he supposedly loves him but yet is constantly manipulating him. He is a really selfish person. Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke... hmm I really hope that when this story ends it ends on a ItaNaru note, for real I really don't think Sasuke should be getting any sex or loving from Naruto especially being that he hates him. I think for that reason, at least in my opinion the whole ItaNaruSasu thing has gotten wierd, its not the same anymore. Before it was just hot but now its like everytime there is a smex scene with Naruto and Sasuke involved I keep on thinking about how much he hates Naruto. Although the one thing that I was really happy with about this chapter was the fact Sasuke's plan to separate them didn't work. But he's immortal so I guess we can't kill him off, too bad! And lol, you must really hate Naruto, its like you wake up in the morning going I think I am going to make Naruto suffer again in my next chapter. Just joking! But really Naruto just can't seem to get a break with you, which oddly enough seems pretty amusing.
On a happier note is Kiba coming back, I missed him. I swear they should have kicked Sasuke out for a housemate and brung in Kiba, definitely would have been some good times then. Oh and thanks for reminding me when mentioning how harsh Sakura's death was I totally forgot about Lee, poor Lee I am so sorry I actually like you as a character. So aah.... r.i.p I guess.
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor sakura and lee. Man this fic is trul dark at heart neh? You write it so excellently! ^.^ Please more!
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oouuucchhh..!! T_T
sasuke.. waaaahhh.. you're so mean. stupid naruto you should go with sakura and lee but if you do that the story will end and i wont be able to read sasuke again.. arrggss.. angsty sasuke. i hope he can be truly happy with someone and get over itachi? how about sai sasori or gaara? hahaha you choose sasuke. Ü all of the above? good! haha im getting desperate. thank you for updating Ü i really love this fic <3
sasuke.. waaaahhh.. you're so mean. stupid naruto you should go with sakura and lee but if you do that the story will end and i wont be able to read sasuke again.. arrggss.. angsty sasuke. i hope he can be truly happy with someone and get over itachi? how about sai sasori or gaara? hahaha you choose sasuke. Ü all of the above? good! haha im getting desperate. thank you for updating Ü i really love this fic <3
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
gah!! itachi is such a butthead! i really want naruto to find out it was him but then again i dont!!! GAH!! this story makes me mad but i absolutely LOVE it!! please update soon-- i cant wait to see what happens!!! X3
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kudos for the Sakura erradication ^^.... Itachi is gaining (humanity?) concience? LOL however he won't win any foxyfoxy heart anytime soon... although partially is foxyfoxy himself at fault too he shouldn't have called the bitch.... but who cares she's now gone... You know I thought he'd gone suicidal Like in he got to the apartement (in silence) went to the shower, shaved himself clean, dressed himself nicely, went to the kitchen, ate a piece of pie, took out his cellphone, told Kiba good bye... and jumped out of the window while Itachi watching him with a huge quetion mark LOL this however was somewhat good (srry I'm a bit biased right now T^T)
but it seems NARUTO'S SUFFERING WON'T END... I mean Itachi might be gaining a tad bit of humanity... but seriously he's lacking common sense. If Naruto is converted into an Inmortal right now he'll only finish breaking him... even if Naru has somewhat developed a kind of Stockolm Syndrome.
On a side note Sasuke must die... I mean no matter how nice and hot the sex scenes with him are... his angsty emo-ness is ticking me off ^^U
but it seems NARUTO'S SUFFERING WON'T END... I mean Itachi might be gaining a tad bit of humanity... but seriously he's lacking common sense. If Naruto is converted into an Inmortal right now he'll only finish breaking him... even if Naru has somewhat developed a kind of Stockolm Syndrome.
On a side note Sasuke must die... I mean no matter how nice and hot the sex scenes with him are... his angsty emo-ness is ticking me off ^^U
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I see the solution smex the little fox senseless into a false
sense of security. Brilliant Itachi, just brilliant, and
Sasuke how blind can you be. Smart Naruto you confessed one
in your favor, now Itachi is going to work to make you happy,
and has for Sasuke I see his life becoming more miserable
since Itachi will make his Koi immortal, and make him happy.
For that reason alone Sasuke will have issues. Looking forward
to the next chappie............
sense of security. Brilliant Itachi, just brilliant, and
Sasuke how blind can you be. Smart Naruto you confessed one
in your favor, now Itachi is going to work to make you happy,
and has for Sasuke I see his life becoming more miserable
since Itachi will make his Koi immortal, and make him happy.
For that reason alone Sasuke will have issues. Looking forward
to the next chappie............
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww...poor naru-chan :( At least he got some smut out of it. Personally, i'm happy that she's dead. She didn't deserve naru anyhow. *starts looking through wedding gowns*
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
Very complex relationship(s) that you have going here. Excellent!
update!
Very complex relationship(s) that you have going here. Excellent!
update!
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved it!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!