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well, ok the lemon was cool, ok really really HAAWWWT!, but i'm glad naru still feels some guilt. i mean, yeah itachi's getting attached but darn it! he still killed naru's friends and could again!

alright, one last vent, could naru get a little revenge somewhere? pleeeeeease? i mean, there's gotta be some way for him to push itachi's buttons and open his eyes, then everyone can live happily ever after! ;-) hahahahaha! i think this story is pretty dang cool, keep up the good work!

Jesus Christ... intense
Awesome chapter. Can't wait for more!
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im kind of staring blankly at the screen and trying to figure out what to say about that chapter. sasuke was kind of an ass. but it was understandable, and not really all that bad until the snake part. and really, i cant fault him for that totally cause he was following the rules. naruto really shouldnt have called her, the moron. sasuke though, didnt have to take as much satisfaction in hurting naruto as he did. i should feel bad for sakura, but i cant. i do feel bad for lee though.

loved it!!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!

yeeeeessssssssss.........
atlast! sakura. dead. for real. YEAH!! rock on baby!! :D

Talk about obsessed. He killed the girl though he did warn him, and
maybe now Naruto will listen, not.

OUCH that was so fucking harsh! I may not like Sakura in general but she wasn't such a bad character in this story, you can't help but feel bad for her (and Naruto). But wow you really did her in, lol! Sasuke is being Mr. Major Prick here in the beginning of this chapter, I'll just add that to the list of his titles. Let's see so far we have Mr. Emo Bitch, Mr. Ice Prince and now Mr. Major Prick, you see the pattern here.

So yeah like I was saying Sasuke was being Mr. Major Prick being all shitty to Naru, when really its not Naru's fault Itachi doesn't love him. I really, really hate Sasuke in this story. Naruto, who I absolutely love in this story well besides Itachi who I am mad at right now, anyway Naruto must feel like he is in an episode of the Twilight Zone. Although he will probably blame himself it is not his fault what happened to Sakura because 1) he is just too nice, its in his character to care and be worried about people regardless of the situation (remember how in Naruto he still loves the village and villagers even though they treat him bad). They are stupid for not expecting him to do something like that. Besides he was saying goodbye its called closure. God Itachi's such a fucking idiot, but I'll get to that later! And 2)It seemed like she was going to be killed anyway because like she said how did Kankuro get to her house so quick. It really was a setup if I ever saw one.

Now let's get to the fact that Itachi is such a fucking idiot. He had a good thing going with Naru so far and then he had to go ruin it. I think he was just thinking out of jealousy and possessiveness but I think he screwed things up right here. Yeah Naruto is Mr. Nice and crap but when he finds out that Itachi set this up he is going to frustrated and he may start hating Itachi again (I know I would). Itachi is just playing right into Sasuke's hands, who is trying to separate them. Hell he wants them to hate each other, wake up 'Tachi.

This is really going to affect Naru badly, and what affects Naruto is going to affect Itachi because then Itachi won't have any of Naruto's smiles that he loves. And when Itachi is not getting Naruto's smiles then he is not being 'nice' to Sasuke. And then poor Sasuke is going to start turning into Mr. Emo Bitch again complaining even more about how Itachi doesn't care about him. Its like a domino effect, one even triggers another. So really instead of Sasuke trying to break them up he should be trying to keep them together so that way he gets 'nice' Itachi.

Oh and Kank is fine, I mean like you said he is never this cruel so of course he is going to be ooc, but the way you portrayed seems to fit him in this story. I am sure there are more sadistic things he could have done so even still his temperment is mild which is fine. And when is the freeloading slut going to come back, he really makes my day. I can't help but wonder how he is going to feel about recent events. And my heart goes out to your Naru they really are being so cruel to you, its so sad he is kind of like a slave or a puppet. Anyway see you next chapter!

Wow, poor Sakura and Lee. What is Naruto going to do now? Two of his friends seriously hurt, maybe dead, and I'm sure Itachi will point out how it's his own fault. Will Naruto try to get back at the Snakes? And even though Sasuke had something to do with this, I feel bad for him because he really wants Itachi to love him. And I don't even like Uchihacest (unless Naruto is in a threesome with them anyway). Looking forward to your next update!

poor sakura-- usually id welcome this sort of torture to sakura- but im feeling a little compassion for her-- not really sure why though---- hopefully naruto will be alright please update soon!! i really love this story!!

I liked it very much! I think Kankuro has it in him to be that evil. I mean...even Konohamaru is evil enough to be in the snakes. Great chap. Hopefully Sakura is gone for good now,