rate_review Reviews

God drama queen is so right. For real Sasuke needs to stop being emo for a moment and relax with his spoiled its all about me attitude. Its a typical case of girl in love with boy, boy in love with someone else, girl not happy about that, but in this case their all boys. Why the heck should I feel sorry for Sasuke when in the previous chapter with them he was thinking of devious ways to hurt Naruto and/or Itachi just because Itachi doesn't love him like that. And the crazy part about it, is that Naruto is Naruto, he is so freaking nice and everything to Sasuke that is kind of like really how could you hate him. Its not like Naru-chan originally asked to be put in that situation and taken away from his girlfriend (although I am sure he doesn't regret it now.) He doesn't even know Sasuke harbors the ill feelings towards him because he is just that type of person. I hope Naruto remains oblivous though, I think the realization might hurt him, he may not care for Sasuke like he does Itachi but he still cares for him. Really you can't force someone to love you, like you love them. Itachi offered him what he was able to and its up to Sasuke to accept it or not. To me Sasuke still has so much growing up to do.

And Naruto is so fucking hot in this chapter with all the dirty talk, I was like wow I am impressed. Loved the post sex cuddling scene with ItaNaru, heck I just love them in general. And lol at Kiba, he's such a freeloading slut but I just love his carefree attitude here. Its pretty refreshing. I am so sad that this story is ending soon because I love this story! I hope one day you write another ItaNaru fic.

So yeah once again another long review but really Sasuke was pissing me off here , it was like before he was okay but now he's treading in dangerous territory with that attitude of his and so I felt the need to rant. See you next chappie!

omg i love this story!! gaara thing with kiba was a little scary- but hott none the less!! and i love the three ways with itachi sasuke and naruto-- those are really hott X3 please update soon!

I feel so sorry for Sasuke. He only want's his brother's love :( Funny ending though hehe poor Kiba :D:D

Jealous Sasuke is always a plus, besides Itachi needs Naruto. From what I gather
he keeps him sane, and he loves him. Enjoyed the chappie..........

loved it!!!! can't wait to find out what happens with naruto, itachi and sasuke next, and kiba!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!

im.. starting to hate.. naruto.. and feel sorry for sasuke.. btw, sasuke's right.. kiba's still alive.. wtf.. and sakura too!!!!?!? aww. too many unneccessary characters. i hope sasuke would feel *real* better nxt chapters..

damn. that was even better then the last one...damn. i cant stop saying it. i laugh at kiba.

and i feel bad for sasuke. geeze that was just mean itachi!

Wonderfully hot fic! My nose was bleeding the whole time ^_^ If you would like i could go over your un-betaed chapters for you. It could never hurt to have 2 betas could it?

I've been gone for a minute because of school and when I signed on to AFF I was so upset to see that I missed like the past three chapters that were out. So that means I pretty much have to leave my thoughts in a nutshell. First things first I am so loving the progress with Itachi and Naruto. I think Itachi should upgrade Naruto's status since he already said he didn't really want to share him any more and realized he loved him. Then he shouldn't be thinking of Naruto as a pet anymore should he? Although I think Itachi has some business to take care of with the Snakes, to remind everyone especially those that have doubts like Tobi why he is the leader and is so powerful. I loved the scene when Kiba was caught it was really good, Naruto's reaction was priceless.

And speaking of scenes Sasuke better back off Itachi is taken! And speaking of taken I loved the Gaa/Kiba lemon it was definitely hot, and I hope in the future maybe you think about adding a Ita/Kiba/Naru one, I don't really see Kiba and Naruto doing anything like that but I really wanted to see Ita/Kiba get it on (Kiba so wants him) and I don't really think it would be fair if Naruto wasn't included. And while I love Kiba being a horny, manslut, masochist here and I really would not like to see that change, if you do think about a pairing for him I actually like the whole Gaa/Kiba thing. Kiba could be like Gaara's pet. And while I don't expect them to have a lovey dovey relationship with Gaara's personality I do think they would go pretty well together here, Kiba likes attention and Gaara, and Kiba could provide Gaara with a sexual outlet or whatever.

Also since Itachi is immortal where does that leave Naruto, since eventually one day he would have to die? And I definitely think the issue of what to do with Kiba now that he nows will be interesting, since they didn't kill him obviously they have to do something with him to make sure he doesn't 'talk' or whatever. I don't think they trust him like that for him to keep quiet or something and would take extra precautions. To be honest I think the only reason why Itachi hasn't threatened him yet was because of fear of hurting Naru and because he is still dealing with the fact that he loves him. Hmm maybe he could live with the two of them or maybe Kiba would be 'assigned' to someone. Anyway great chapters, this story just keeps on getting better and better!

****Edit**** IT WASN'T UNTIL I WROTE ALL OF THIS THAT I REMEMBERED THAT GAARA IS WITH KAKASHI ISN'T HE (THE FIC RED), BUT YOU KNOW WHAT I BLAME YOU FOR ALL THE GAARA/KIBANESS AFTER ALL YOU KNEW IN THE BEGINNING THAT I WANTED GAARA/KIBA AND YOU INCLUDED THEM IN HERE! SO IF YOU GET TO THE END OF THIS REVIEW AND YOU START TO THINK, 'AAH DIDN'T I MENTION THAT GAARA WAS ALREADY TAKEN' YOU HAVE NO ONE BUT YOURSELF TO BLAME FOR ALL THE IDEAS WITH THE TWO OF THEM GOING ON IN MY HEAD RIGHT NOW, LOL!

Are we headed towards Naruto becoming immortal? I hope so.