rate_review Reviews

GREAT.

There is just no other word to descibe your story.

Well, but there is something in my opinion which can make Naruto fight against Sasuke even in your planned scheme.

Itachi will go after him, for the kyubi inside him. I think Sasuke should interfere, not as Narutos friend but after the avenger he claimed for himself he is.

Of course he fails, an he will go with Orochimaru, according to the orignal story. Maybe he harms one or two of Narutos women. That should be reason enough for our blonde friend to go after the emotionless baka.

Well, that is a suggestion only. I wait and see what you write for your story. It is yours after all.

Like I said above it is great.

i for one liked the chapter, alot of people don't care for fillers, and i can understand why. but i like fillers. they make the storied longer, which means there is more for the reader to enjoy. all in all i still love the story and hope to see more of it.

Short, but good. Yeah, I don't see the need to pummel Sasuke, unless they fight each other in the Chuunin Prelims/Finals. You can do largely whatever you want with the character genders, I don't care. Just keep up the good work.

Don't worry about it! I'll still remain loyal to the story and I'm waiting with bated breath for the next chapter!

Interesting chapter, I can't wait to see how the month of the team living together goes!

This was great, I love how you redid the entire Naruto series! I love it when someone deceides to let their own imagination take them places.

It turned out very well done.

Actually, I have an argument for why Tsunade should NOT be in the harem. First off, and I'm sure you know this but I'll repeat if for the argument's sake, she's more than four times his age. Also, she and Jiraiya seem to be the parental, or maybe grandparental, figures in his life. I'd think if you have Naruto "building a family," having some form of a paternal and maternal bond is important. I can understand Shizune, but I've neve understood pairing Naruto and Tsunade; there's a huge age gap, and they behave like mother and child.

On a separate note, what exactly is Naruto's bloodline? Has it been revealed yet, because I've no idea what it is. You keep mentioning it, but unless it's the reason Yugao was in his bed, I know nothing about it.

I love this story. I don't know how I missed the release of chapter 3, but the chapters aren't too painfully long and it was an easy catch up.


I think the greatest bit about this story is despite all the changes, you've kept the characters pretty in character. I also love smart Naruto. I think the series should do some mental reorganizing in the cannon too. Heh. Keep up the good work. I'm extremely pleased you are not heads off rushing into smut. Lemons are lovely, but plot is better. ^^

no boys...le sigh...but it is coming along nicely...but no boys...total le sigh...

Good update! Can only wonder how they'll get along once living with each other. Keep it coming.