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ok, his bloodline chakra inflicts different responces from different girls, hinata seems to lose some of her inabitions, havent seen enough to see how ino responds. and tenten seems to get edgey (heh, weapon girl pun)
but it also seems it attracts girls all around him as well. wich could mean that the bloodline more often gives a positive pull rather than getting people pissy.

either i am spot on or a mile away, but it dont really matter. i like the story and want to see it finished.

ok good sotry but damn man hurry up with chapter 11 its been over 11 months since you updated. as for suggestions i suggest that naruto gets his tanks running a bit smoother in the next chapter and maybe have hinata accidentaly (hehe yeah right but she should at least make it seem like an accident) walking in on him in the shower and maybe she can't control her urges and joins him and they play around a little bit (not saying sex but at least a hand job for him and a fingering for her just to get things started on the whole hot scene)

hey there....just wondering if maybe i could convice you to finish with the next chappie?!?!?!

laters! ~_^

miko

This is pretty good, I do have some questions, though
1.When you say Tenten's summon will be dragons, do you mean eastern-style, serpentine dragons, or western, European style dragons.
2.Speaking of summons, I do like having Naruto summoning foxes (even though I do like the toads as well, but I digress) with kyuubi as the boss summon, would she be unavailable, or could she be temporally summoned? If she could be summoned, would her summon form be stuck in fox form, or could she take her human form as well? And finally, would there be different types of foxes, with different numbers of tails, or maybe low-level kudakitsune (pipe-fox, a really small fox, sometimes as small as a mouse)?
3.Would any summons have a skill to teach like the toads sage teachings (like werewolf Hinata, that would be kick-ass, and a phoenix sounds like a type of creature that could teach Ino something)?

Also, as far as a fight between Naruto and Sasuke, I agree with you, since they aren't on a team together, and Naruto is not after Sakura anymore there is no reason for them to fight, the only times I can think of is during the chunin exams, or maybe during Sasuke's retrieval (and that's a bit of a big maybe, since, other than Sasuke being a leaf nin, Naruto has no real reason to go after him).

I really hope you update soon.

very interesting storyline.can't wait to see whats next keep on writing ur doing great.i think ino's summons should be birds of prey instead of just phoenix's it adds verity.

love how this is going dont have any sugestions at this time please continue

OH...MY...GOD... THAT was possibly one of the best stories i have ever read. please Please PLEASE make more. if you need help let me know, i can come up with some sort of plot, but i cant write.

please do more

I just joined this day and hav to say you rock seriousli.

This story actualy semmes like a story instead of fuck fest.

Love the herem and I totaly think they all deserve countracts to summoning beast.

Wow.

Pure Genius,Is What I Thought.

I'm In Love With This Fic And Can't Wait To See What Happens.

Thank God You're Not The One For One-Shots And Sporadically-Driven,Without Reason Smut.

What i Like About Your Style Is That It's Realistic Unlike Others.Very Rae To Find.And I Can,Actually,Imagine All The Characters Doing That.

Another Thing,In case of ANY Help : Beta-ing,Giving Idea, And Such - Let me Know. =)

P.S. Just To Let You Know - I'm A Hinata Fan Through And Through.I Don't Mind Who She's With,I Just Want Her IN.I'm More Of A Reverse Harem Person. =P

P.P.S.Keep It Up!Lovin' Your Fics,Again! *Thumbs Up Gai-Style*