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Loving the story so fare also the A/N: Cliffhanger no jutsu… success. was great gave me a good laugh also love the pairing. Keep up the good work and enjoy.

HentaiKing (KS)

I'm still with you.. I am glad to see the updates from you... I am seeing alot of interest in Naruto after he woke up after dispersing his clones but what happened to him to make him such a looker... I hope you update soon... I like Tenten's attitude and hope you make this story so much better and what is their first mission...

Hooray for updates! I'm incredibly amused by Naruto's bloodline, though I still don't quite understand what it does specifically. Still, I imagine it'd be easy to distract any female he enters combat with. Also, a few chapters ago you mentioned Hinata wouldn't be moving quickly in a relationship with Naruto since she's been raised to be innocent (and she still hasn't taken him up on his offer to date her), yet here she was going to use Byakugan to see Naruto naked, and openly commented on Tenten's ass using description I wouldn't have expected from her ("hit that like the fist of an angry kami"). Of course, this isn't a bad thing, and I've no doubt Naruto will grow to appreciate Hinata's attraction to women and the threesomes it will undoubtedly lead them into, but I felt I should point out you didn't seem to be sticking to your earlier statement. If Hinata's going to be this way it's fine, and I like reading it a lot more (makes me chuckle), just stick with it from now on. Based on her actions this chapter, I imagine she's moving closer to an affirmative answer to Naruto's offer of a relationship.

I liked Tenten's initial meeting with Naruto, and I'm interested to see how her feelings for him will change. Maybe once he learns of his "attraction bloodline" he'll use it just to irk her. As for summons, foxes for Naruto, wolves for Hinata, slugs for Sakura; that's all cool. Phoenix and dragons? Now you're moving into the mythical, and not the mythical that fits the Naruto canon. Instead of dragons, why not lizards, or big cats like panthers? Birds of prey instead of phoenixes? They'd fit better, and besides, phoenixes and dragons seem overpowered.

Anyway, this has become one of my favorite fanfictions, so thanks for the update. If there's anyway I can help out this story out (I've got a background in beta reading, though you don't seem to need it), let me know! Also, is there a way for this site to tell me when you update?

Very nice and amusing update, what with all the love-struck women, save for Tenten. Keep up the great work.

lol cute! chappy ten was strange though...i mean why and how did naru get super chick attention. i was lmfao at hinata's coment about tenten's backside. awesomes job plz update soon.

Ya i recongized the names though not all of them off the bat also another suggestion for the Harem you could include Shion (from Shippuuden move not the game who's name starts with an x and i don't really want to try and spell our right now for obivouse reasons) to be in it i mean she looks like a blonde Hinata that makes it all worth it (because Hinata would look hot as a blonde)

you have made my day!! i got to read TWO chapters! ahem.....sorry 'bout that...lost my head.

anyways great chapters! as for the summons, hum.......frog and fox for naruto, foxes for the girls...thru seals that they can have on their bodies in a place that naruto would know of! *evil sex thoughts* heheheh..... *drooling all over the place*

anyways! awesome!

laters! ~_^

I'm glad you were finally able to update please do so again a.s.a.l.a.

I love the new update and can't what for the next one. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN REALLY SOON.

this is a great story update as soon as possible please