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An excellent story! I hope you will be writing more soon.

STILL WAITING, PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

OMG OMG OMGOMG...ILOVE YOU.....make the chapters longer and update soon *bakes a dozen cookies* I will give you all of my cookies if you do!!!!

Great story, I'm new to the site and still figuring out how things work so could you tell me if there is a way the site will alert me to when a new chapter is posted for stories (like yours for example)? Hope to see the next part soon!

Hmmmm.. I got lost a lil bit at the end of chapter nine but I think the teams are really different but new... I wanna see what is going to happen later on with everyone... Hope you update soon and keep up the great work..

In response to your question at the end of chapter 5, wouldn't it make sense that as Naruto gains power that Sasuke would see that as a threat or challenge to his ego? It might make sense that Sasuke would seek out Naruto to challenge him or arrogantly demand the power that Naruto has gained or to belittle it and demand to know who gave it to him because after all Uchiha's are demigods (at least in Sasuke's opinion). As you might have gathered I don't like Sasuke and almost any chance for him to be humiliatingly humbled is something to be looked into from all sides to see if I can't tweak it some to make it even more so.

anyway great story so far, I'm looking forward to the updates.

lol i good and i'm not sure if you updated yet but keep it going ^^

I suppose he had to inspect hsi mindscape sometime, so good work explaining everything. Keep it coming.

Oh no... Naruto's finally discovered how to tap into his mojo! The rest of the kunoichi don't stand a chance!!

Oh no... Naruto's finally discovered how to tap into his mojo! The rest of the kunoichi don't stand a chance!!