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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
keep it goin
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the fantastic chapter i cant wait to see what you have happen next please update again a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww.. poor Naruto. Massive reading hangover... tragic.
Also, I want to know what inspired those dreams. Seems a little odd for all of them to face their worst nightmares in a single night. :P
Also, I want to know what inspired those dreams. Seems a little odd for all of them to face their worst nightmares in a single night. :P
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the updating please keep it up
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good work. I have to say that I wish the chapter had been longer and maybe had something more to it than the dreams and oath, but it was still well done. Keep up the good work and please make longer chapters if the muse will allow it.
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good, if very chilling. Keep up the good work.
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. I think that you moved the story along a bit quickly for it to all be in one chapter but I'm sure it'll balance out next chapter. Update again soon!
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just so you know hanabi is 5 years hinata junior. thats currently 8 in part i and 10 in part 2
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chap, congrats
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I thank this is a great story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.