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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is geting good please Email me when you update next at least untill they get that damn system up and running. Now this is just an idea but why not add Iserabri the scaled girl he saves her and they both are out casts just an idea. later
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that shapter was really interesting. now i can't wait to see the next one! keep up the good work!
Descendant of the shadows
Twisteddarkness
Descendant of the shadows
Twisteddarkness
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February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome
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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story it is very well writen and i can not wait until the next chapter keep it up ^^
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon. Thanks.
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good. Ino has a snappy (and enjoyable) attitude. Can't wait to see how her mother reacts when/if she finally meets Naruto; same with Hiashi. Keep it coming.
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow thanks for the chapter im glad to see that you are taking your story so seriously keep up the fantastic writing and please update again a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I DO NOT approve of Hinata's and Ino's summons's, the Wolves are too close to the dog summon of Kakashi, and someone from a clan who's Jutsu's are based on the mind shouldn't really have a summon, I know you are trying to get them from being too involved with their clan's way's but you shouldn't just destroy a families way just because you can.
But I have to say I like the Harem Roster.
But I have to say I like the Harem Roster.
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What do you mean that 'some inevitably will over the timeskip'? Are you talking about the older members?
I'm glad that you kept Sakura in and I hope that she stays in and doesn't go hopping after Assuke later.
My e-mail is hidan117@yahoo.com.
Please answer my questions about it.
I'm glad that you kept Sakura in and I hope that she stays in and doesn't go hopping after Assuke later.
My e-mail is hidan117@yahoo.com.
Please answer my questions about it.
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! I loved how the humor at the end wrapped up the whole story nicely. This was definitely worth the wait. Update again soon!!!