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for Mission Iruka Christmas

by SumiHatake

schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now if only i could find a xmas morning like that lovely work
person teddybomber
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww.... This story just makes me melt and turn to goo. I absolutely love it! I just want to dance around in happiness and hug someone right now. Great story and just in time for the holidays. Merry jingly everyone! *attacks you with hugs* ^_^ ~teddybomber~
person Anise
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(22-25) What a nice little bit of xmas smut and the back and forth between the two, naughty vs nice, who's getting coal and a contagious kashi were all just really wonderful! I like the idea of all the presents relating somehow back to coal, I may have to write that down and use it, but the most meaningful present wrapped by Kakashi himself was so adorable-he definitely gets extra pats on the head for that! ;)
And finally, all that going on about moving in and really it just came to Kakashi finally asking him, it was a very sweet and fluffy ending to the story! Hope you got spoiled for Christmas and had a great holiday, I look forward to seeing more of your stories! ^_^
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello dear sorry it's took so long to get back to review. I should be off doing other things but I'm waiting for some lunch so I thought I'd delight myself by reading and leaving so explanation on where I've been and going to be for my own readers. Just finished reading Ribbons and loved it. I'm so glad that 'woman' got what was coming to her. Don't you just wish you could use that same trick on others? Off to finish reading the rest.

littleolmee
littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So much for the tower of gingerbread, that was so funny. I wonder when someone will find that one present Iruka wrapped up? Glad Kakashi got his and Iruka's gingerbread people out of danger.
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, well you know there is nothing better than eating the head off the gingerbread man first; that way your sure they can't get too far away if they can't see where they are going. Or of course if you bit the legs than they can't go anywhere either.
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Santa baby! Wonderful early gift there. Well done dear. Hee, hee loved the double meaning with the eating themselves.

littleolmee
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, loved how Kakashi talked about what Iruka did while not letting on he watched. I think they have officially perverted one another; isn't that how it's suppose to be though?

littleolmee
person Anise
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(20/21)'You can't kill him, it's Christmas!' I wonder how many times that has been said in reference to Kakashi considering he's just all kinds of mischief, I have to agree with Iruka though Tsunades reaction really was the best! Why can't I be invited to a fun party like that and oddly enough I now have a craving for gingerbread, I'll have to see if there's any left^^
I hope you have a wonderful holiday and a very Merry Christmas! :)
person nawatia
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O M G!!!! that was SO FUNNY!!!! and Sweet! Also the first time anyone has had the decency to do a "What not to wear" for Gai. Now his outer self matches his inner fabulousness!!! Good Job!!!! Can't wait to see how he and his date are received at the holiday party!