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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(9-14) All of these chapters with Iruka and Kakashi helping Kurenai and Asuma set up for the party were generally very sweet, although I have to say Kakashi's gingerbread town was hilarious as was his sneakiness with the mistletoe, I really love Kakashi's mind it comes up with the craziest things :)
As for a couple of the little in-between chapters like the cranberries I completely agree with Iruka, unless they're in some sort of baked good they are horrible! And I have no sympathy for Kakashi wrapping whatsoever because I'm the only one who can wrap around here so every one always brings there stuff to me. I should probably be doing that right now instead of playing on the internet but how can I resist your updates and as always I'll be looking forward to the next chapters! ^_^
As for a couple of the little in-between chapters like the cranberries I completely agree with Iruka, unless they're in some sort of baked good they are horrible! And I have no sympathy for Kakashi wrapping whatsoever because I'm the only one who can wrap around here so every one always brings there stuff to me. I should probably be doing that right now instead of playing on the internet but how can I resist your updates and as always I'll be looking forward to the next chapters! ^_^
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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I wish I could go shopping with Iruka and Kakashi it would make it so much more fun (and amusing), my shopping was boring and frustrating and I'm still not done *whimpers*
I loved how they handled Ayame, they were able to let her know what was going on between them without causing her too much embarrassment, it was very sweet :)
Great chapters and I look forward to more as always, this is such a fun story!
death by paper cuts *giggles*
I wish I could go shopping with Iruka and Kakashi it would make it so much more fun (and amusing), my shopping was boring and frustrating and I'm still not done *whimpers*
I loved how they handled Ayame, they were able to let her know what was going on between them without causing her too much embarrassment, it was very sweet :)
Great chapters and I look forward to more as always, this is such a fun story!
death by paper cuts *giggles*
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ayame, but really who could blame her for having a crush on Kashi and I love that Iruka really was concerned about her feelings and wasn't just being all jealous boyfriend, that seems just so like him (at least in my mind :)
Chapter 5 was just so sweet and fluffy, I could have just died from the cuteness of it all! But I also loved how you showed that they had past connections and how they seemed to have passed in and out of each others life without even realizing it, it's adorable to think of them interacting as kids.
This is such a wonderful holiday story, makes you feel all warm and fuzzy inside! ^_^
Chapter 5 was just so sweet and fluffy, I could have just died from the cuteness of it all! But I also loved how you showed that they had past connections and how they seemed to have passed in and out of each others life without even realizing it, it's adorable to think of them interacting as kids.
This is such a wonderful holiday story, makes you feel all warm and fuzzy inside! ^_^
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Since they don't have individual chapter reviews like ff I'm afraid I'm going to ramble on so I hope you don't mind a long review ;)
ch1-I liked the symbolism you came up with for the candy cane and how you connected the shinobi and civilians together, chibi-ruka is too cute!
ch2-I can't help but think that cranky, pouty Kakashi is rather adorable and also that this would be a really beautiful way to remember people who were no longer with us.
ch3-I should have seen this coming it seems so obvious that Kakashi would continue the tradition since he already spends so much time talking with the dead, it was really sweet how they had all the ones they loved together for the holidays.
It's a really great start this is looking to be a really sweet and wonderful story, I can't wait to read the rest! ^_^
ch1-I liked the symbolism you came up with for the candy cane and how you connected the shinobi and civilians together, chibi-ruka is too cute!
ch2-I can't help but think that cranky, pouty Kakashi is rather adorable and also that this would be a really beautiful way to remember people who were no longer with us.
ch3-I should have seen this coming it seems so obvious that Kakashi would continue the tradition since he already spends so much time talking with the dead, it was really sweet how they had all the ones they loved together for the holidays.
It's a really great start this is looking to be a really sweet and wonderful story, I can't wait to read the rest! ^_^