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for Ballerina at Sea

by rottenbiscuit

person poecilia
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty interesting so far; I look forward to updates. :)
person Lhum
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is looking pretty interesting, and I'm a big fan of this pairing. I think though that you need to look over your work one more time before posting, or get another person to do it if you're having trouble, because you seem to be able to write but I'm noticing a number of small grammar and/or typing errors throughout the story. Just trying to help!

By the way, it's an interesting title. What does it refer to?
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm still really enjoying the story. I have been really busy, so I haven't had time to leave a review, but I want you to know that it is going well. (and do you think you would ever do a Naruto x Sakura story?)
person llyoung
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update.
person llyoung
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked Hiromi and it was good to know what punishment the girl who blew up the outpost received.
person Hen
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story! Too bad for that girl who destroyed the outpost though.
person llyoung
schedule December 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another update. It was nice to know that Tsunade doesn't care much for the classes either.
person llyoung
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update.
person ixxora
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what are the classes all about? i am so darned confused..upadate more so i'll found out! :p
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know this story is in adultfanfiction.net so its probably gonna have a lemon, but part of me really really wants Sakura to start a kunoichi revolution and make the class not mandatory.