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for Eyeliner

by Lihrah

schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol This was cute. I loved the fact it was all dialogue with no descriptions. I don't know why, but it helped me see it better in my head. Also, I wanna know who Naruto was talking to...I have a feeling it was Sakura, but who knows. If it is really owari, it was a great one shot, but if not...I can't wait to read more. ^_~