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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I admit I never saw that coming...I thought it was another NaruSaku pairing and was pleasantly surprised to see it was JiraTsu. Good as always!
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(0_0) -_- (0_0) Eeeeeeeew... Ol' geezer sexx! Icky sticky! Actually, it was pretty well written but you need to work on length; you're stories are over pretty quickly. With practice, I bet they could be really lemony. Right now, they are very sweet but lack a certain amount of tartness.
Keep going!
Keep going!
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHA!! ithe whole time i thought this was a narusaku fic.... wow i feel sooo stupid right now... o well love the fic hope you write more!
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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was so cool!! Steamy too! Go Tsunade and Jiraiya!!! I knew they would work! Thanks for writing this fic. AWESOME!
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice for amoment I was thinking you did an older Naruto and Sakura. The scene you put them into was a good one. The memories are what threw me off because Jiriya and Naruto are alike in many ways... Hope to see some more stories from you
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. It was perfect. Have you read the manga lately? Do you think he is going to die? Just thinking that and reading what you wrote just makes all the more great and sad. Will you continue this?
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I agree with the TsuJir, not enough of it, but at first I thought this was NaruSaku! (Laughs while rubbing back of head in embarrassment) It was good though, while a little short! Wonder what else you'll write....
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good. For a second it sounded like team 7. Keep up the good work.
Rox
Rox