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That was great. Keep going.

WHY did I wait so long to finally read this awesome story?!?! KUDOS! I mean seriously, you had me hooked from chapter 1! Keep up the amazing work!

This is a really sweet sweet story. and i love the various yu yu hakusho references. i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!

I wanted to say that I am quite impressed with this story. I would like to point out some things though. First of all, I suggest that you go back through the entire story and proofread for spalling and punctuation errors. with the punctuation especially, it will make your story much easier to read. Seconly, I wanted to let you know that the likelihood of Kyuubi and Naruto running out of Chakra is zero, since Kyuubi has infinite Chakra. I would suggest that this tower of torment be in actuality one final attempt by Orochimaru to take over Naruto's body. And lastly, I would suggest that you look up the legends behind the diety names and the tailed beasts, as they will provide insight as to how these beings exist in oriental mythology. here is a link with a large amount of informaiton regarding the beasts http://forums.narutofan.com/showthread.php?t=57918 . Here is a mythological reference to Agni http://www.pantheon.org/articles/a/agni.html . Here is information on Rudra http://www.pantheon.org/articles/r/rudra.html .

Ok. First of all I would like to say that I have never and will never flame a story, though I do understand if you are a bit pissed of by harsh or brutal reviews. Yet these reviews of mine, that have been sometimes hard on you are no flames but honest opinions. And never have I stooped so low as to insult you or your work. I have always pointed out flaws that is true, though I have also pointed out ways of how to remove these flaws. And if I say I`m dissappointed in your current chapter, then I also tell you why I say so, and what did not meet my expectations, and whatever you say but pointing out a flaw in astory or chapter to the respective author, and then suggesting ways of remeding these is constructive criticism in my opinion, and no flame. It shows I care for your story and that I wish to help you elevate your story to ever newer and heigher heights.
Now to the fact that I have pointed out numerous times the in some chapters abysmal grammar and spelling. THIS NO FLAME EITHER! Ok, if one reads a tory or a story of a story in which one finds many grammatical errors and/or spelling mistakes it severly hampers a eader in reading and understanding the story and fully understanding and appreaciating the beauty of the story. To make the picture clearer I´ll give you an example: Imagine you want to recite a wonderful, romantic poem to the girl you love, though out comes a poem often interrupted by a stutter, the whole beauty and romance of the poem had been blown away. A good story is this poem, and your story is good, with the grammatical errors and spelling mistakes making up the stutter. to wholly appeciate the beauty of a story and what happens in a chapter one has to remove the stutter.
Therefore I beg of you please do not take any of my reviews as a flame, they are just honest opinions, nothing more and nothing less.
Archfiend

I seem to remember reviewing this story before, but having not seen a review from me with the others I am going to assume maybe it was mine that you look at as a flame. I don't remember what I said, but if it was rude I do apologize. Despite there being elements in this that don't like and despite Hinata's extreme OOC'ness I still enjoy it. Hence why I have it bookmarked and check it every so often. Flames suck and I generally have an anti flame policy. If I broke that here again I am sorry. No I am not a big fan of Naruto basically turning into Kurama, but it isn't my story and it hasn't hindered my ability to enjoy. Keep up the good work.

to tell the truth, I was a bit dissappointed at this chapter, it seemed rushed to me , as I had gained the impression before, that the tower inside of naruto`s mind would be harder to endure, and you only described two situations, making the Journey in Naruto`s mind seem relaatively easy. Nonetheless please continue with this story, and i was glad of an update.

Sorry for my long absence. I was busy with my exams.

Nice, I should have known it, that you plan to give Naruto Kuramas powers, first as you mentioned the nature of his Blood Line.
I didn't see it coming that you give Hinata the Hadoken. But I won't complain.

Now I wait to see what is happening with Narutos Nightmares.

Thanks for your good work.

Very nice chapter and an important as I suppose in the storyline. So everybody wonders what dangers Hinata and Jiraya will encounter, I personally cannot wait for the next chapter. Oh and I found it hiairious how Hinata treated Kyuubi.Poor Kyuubi. A carefully built up image of a demon whipped into oblivion by one sentence. Kyuubi-chan. Poor guy

man u take 4 every 2 update cjapters but gj on it ^_^ and u have some spelling eorrs but other then that nice