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Although your story is not bad, don`t you think that naruto is not a bit too powerful, I mean killing nearly 50 Oto nins with a swing of his tail? That is a bit too unrealistic, even for the Naruto world. There are obviously still a few mysteries surrounding takamichi, so I`ll be waiting for those to be revealed. The story development was not bad, though the fight was boring. It was onesided from the start, Naruto fas far too powerful and the Oto Nins just mere cannon fodder, I`d have preferred a protrackted battle, with Naruto being pushed to his limits and nearly losing, before overcoming Orochimaru and the others fight the Sound . That was one oppurtunity where you could have done really well, but you just didn`t either because you were unable to see it or too lazy. That was really depressing

Well I would like to see you use a song that will bring out the hate for Orochimaru... I think a song from Korn or System of a Down... Any band that is more of a Heavy metal feel. I think the song should be a hard hitter and should help move the readers with it... Hope to see your new chapter soon.. Josh

Not a bad story, but could use an edit to clean up the grammatical errors (tenses sometimes, but especially your punctuation, which is abysmal) and the parts where either words or in some cases whole groups of words are missing from a sentence. Other than these flaws the story itself is not bad as mentioned beforehand, just sometimes very hard to read as one has to figure out the sentences which took some of the fun out yet even so if edited could be great

I`m sorry for the brutal review I gave you before, but that was after reading the first chapter which still is hard to read and in need of an edit, but the other chapters are amazing ,and I`ve seen you`ve greatly improved. (question: Why does Naruto have his mothers surname and not his fathers who was the Yondaime Hokage? does anyone Know?

I love this story. I hope you update soon.

MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!! this story is absolutly amazing i'm normally a patient person,but i'm waitong on the edge of my seat for you to put out the next Chap = )

If I can still vote, I would have to vote on Orochimaru attacking the village. I am really enjoying this story so far and I can't wait to read some more.

love the fic, and i say sound would want sauske back

Hmmm, First of all, Awesome job so far with the story. You have me thuroughly involved. I personally would like to see Itachi and Kisame attack the village, maybe somehow abduct Sakura just to piss off Sasuke. It's really up to you. Good luck, and keep up the Great job.

Hmm. If I'm forced to have a guess, I would say that someone of Takamichis team will be the one for Ha Do Ken. ^^

But I will let you surprise me with that. I'm eager to the next chapter. ^^.