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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well. So far we have the Swords from Devil may cry, the Plant Weapons from Yu yu Hakusho and I think those "Tornado Fists" are also from Yu Yu Hakusho. ^^
I'm still waiting for the Street Fighter Moves like Ha Do ken.
Or at least Yusukes RAI GUN, which is similar to Ha do ken ^^.
Hope you don't plan to get the old Hag from Yu yu here ^^.
I impatiently wait for the next chapter.
I'm still waiting for the Street Fighter Moves like Ha Do ken.
Or at least Yusukes RAI GUN, which is similar to Ha do ken ^^.
Hope you don't plan to get the old Hag from Yu yu here ^^.
I impatiently wait for the next chapter.
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Say, you don't plan to give the Kyubi a human form,resembling one say 16 year old guy with red hair, do you?
Man, turn any plant into a weapon? That sounds very well like Kurama from Yu yu Hakusho.
I assume you took the Idea from there?
Very interesting. I'm eager for the next one.
Man, turn any plant into a weapon? That sounds very well like Kurama from Yu yu Hakusho.
I assume you took the Idea from there?
Very interesting. I'm eager for the next one.
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fisrt of all, great work. i really enjoy this story. second, how about Orochimaru attacks. it would make sense considering that Sasuke is gone.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice Lemon in the last chapter.
And it is a interesting reason for the Kyubi to get nuts.
I disliked Danzou all the time. ^^
The chapters are a bit short, but this is compensated with the frequency new chapters arrive. So no complaining there.
Keep up your good work.
And it is a interesting reason for the Kyubi to get nuts.
I disliked Danzou all the time. ^^
The chapters are a bit short, but this is compensated with the frequency new chapters arrive. So no complaining there.
Keep up your good work.
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Shadowfox your lemon was pretty sweet.. LOL because lemons are usually sour but you made it just right... I hope you get time to update soon... What is going to happen next and is there a child coming for naruto and Hinata and what is going to happen between Sasuke and Sakura
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April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the update.. I wonder why did the Kyuubi attack Konoha myself. But I never could get a good reason for it. But I'm glad you made the reason why from Danzou who is an old bastard who needs to die anyways if you ask me... What happened to Lee and Kakashi and Might Guy... Hope you get time to update soon..
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Sasuke does something he should of done from the very beginning.. He should of stayed were he belonged and not to a shit hole... If he would of stayed he would be able to do everything a bit differently then passing a three-five day test... Hope you make the next chapter just as great... Take care
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome ^^keep it going plz
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very Good Update.
But Man. You should see after the correct speech.
Hinata's Neji NEE san, well I wouldn't think Neji was a girl, was he?
So NI san would be correct. ^^
Other than that? I like this chapter. Good Idea to make Hinata live with Naruto.
I'm waiting for the next Chapter.
But Man. You should see after the correct speech.
Hinata's Neji NEE san, well I wouldn't think Neji was a girl, was he?
So NI san would be correct. ^^
Other than that? I like this chapter. Good Idea to make Hinata live with Naruto.
I'm waiting for the next Chapter.
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well. I see you switched to smaller chapters instead of the larger ones you began your story with.
I have to say it is a good idea, since it is not as much work to see the chapters through for mistakes and quotations and stuff like that. Well of course it makes your readers wait impatiently for updates though ^^.
Interesting idea with Hiashi, most people seem to hate him, which I can understand to a point, but in the series he had showed his improvement in character to his children and even Neji.
I eager to read more of your story. It is a very good Idea and I#m curious what Naruto can really do with those Swords.
And like I said, I would love to see a Ha Do Ken like Variant of the Rasengan. Maybe not from Naruto, since he is busy to form his Futon Rasen Shuriken, but maybe Hinata could learn something like that Hehe.
Well, it is only a suggestion. It is your story after all. Keep up your good work.
I have to say it is a good idea, since it is not as much work to see the chapters through for mistakes and quotations and stuff like that. Well of course it makes your readers wait impatiently for updates though ^^.
Interesting idea with Hiashi, most people seem to hate him, which I can understand to a point, but in the series he had showed his improvement in character to his children and even Neji.
I eager to read more of your story. It is a very good Idea and I#m curious what Naruto can really do with those Swords.
And like I said, I would love to see a Ha Do Ken like Variant of the Rasengan. Maybe not from Naruto, since he is busy to form his Futon Rasen Shuriken, but maybe Hinata could learn something like that Hehe.
Well, it is only a suggestion. It is your story after all. Keep up your good work.