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December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the concept right now, but please put quotations where there's dialoge, it would make things much easier, but for now, keep up the good work
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no. In my opinion it is far from "sucking".
I'm eager to read more. But one request. Please try to mark direct Speech, thoughts and story with some tags. Sometimes it is hard to follow.
Otherwise it is a very good 1st chapter.
I wan't to read more of this.
I'm eager to read more. But one request. Please try to mark direct Speech, thoughts and story with some tags. Sometimes it is hard to follow.
Otherwise it is a very good 1st chapter.
I wan't to read more of this.
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@_@ Where's the punctuation? I can't get through this if makes my head hurt. Get someone to read and correct this please and add some quotation marks PLEASE!