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for More Than Meets the Eye

by lexjamandme

person SDRR
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have a friend that memorized the monologe, an reminds me every time she calls. At least your ramen one was funny.
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it made me watch thetransformers the movie again this was a cute story. actually i feel kinda bad that this was only my third time for watching it so much you rule.
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha i love sasuke's reaction at the end, i soo wasnt expecting it. classic. I really really thought i had read this story before but it seems i was missing out. very cute.
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't read much SasuNaru (Huh not that anyone could ever tell kukukukukuku) No wait, I do read it I just don't write it. XP THIS is very disturbingly funny. *giggles*

Thanks for the review earlier and keep up the good work. *hugs* Ja ne.
person LadyWolf
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE MY HERO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!! LOLOLOLOLO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You are freakin' awesome!!!!!!!!!1 That was hilarious!!!!!!! I got tears in my eyes from reading this!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This just proves it.....you have a very active imagination when it comes to our favorit blonde and dark haired boys!!!!!!!!!!!
person digiditz
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As a rabid Transformers AND Naruto fan I believe you've made my day yet again.
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was adorable. and transformers kicks ass. i love love love your writing. i hope you are able to write lots of stuff for this fandom.
person PrplGrl
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank You!! I know that monologue by heart as well!! I saw Transformers 10 times in the theater, and figured I'd had enough when I was saying the lines throughout the DVD. This was very funny! You should do one for the monologue at the end of the movie, too. That would be awesome!! Keep it up!

Prpl Grl
person shai69
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I have never read a story that was so short yet so freaking hillarious. I've re-read it several times and I'm still laughing. I would quote but I loved the whole damn thing.
person Luma
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was highly amusing. xD