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for Lessons Learned

by Inigeshi

person Nicoleh
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Is there going to be a chapter two to the story?
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More... it was... different, and that's a good thing... not very interested in het but you (and a few other good writers) make me rethink it... it's not too bad I guess... I like the story, interesting interaction between Jiraiya and Tsunade.
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes Jiraya gets the better of Tsunade. I wonder what it would look like if they had kids? Awesome short story.
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Continue... please! I like a dominant Jiraiya! Damn he can spank me anytime! (GRIN)
person Taigia
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I'd love to see it continued. Hoping for a sequel.
person WOW!!
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sequel??
person roxnroll
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kinda hot! I like this couple. Can't wait to read more.
Rox
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool