rate_review Reviews

I just found your story today ... and read all the chapters back-to-back. I liked the story even if it is highly doubtful that Shika could have that much sex in such a short time. :) The only real "flaws" I found in the whole story line was that everyone kept mentioning 1) how 'loose/streched' shika was and 2) the 'volume of cum' in shika's ass. Shika only bottomed for 6 people during the entire story, the second being Asuma who took the guy without any prep at 2-3 hours after Iruka which sounds rather painful (if not dangerous).

Anyway... I have come across stories that had much more 'quirks' to deal with, so overall I realy, realy enjoyed your story.

P.S. Thank you for not writing a chapter with either Lee, Gai or Sasuke as a pairing with Shika.

This is one of THE HOTTEST and most erotic fics I had read in a VERY long time. I seriously can't chose which chapter is a fav...thank you so much for sharing this. Awesome job! :D

LOve GML i adore this story. and ofcourse, nice plot bunny!!

really good!!!!

Holy shizzmozz. That was hot. I just pausing here to write this and then I'm gone reading.

Woot. Smut is indeed a wonderful thing...and you do it so well. Anyway I liked the story and the well written smut, you developed the emotions well too. In any case I liked the fic and I'm sending you kisses for brightening up my night.
~Dani

Okay, I went away for the holidays and was busy with my new job for awhile, but when I got back to surfing this site I found these great Shika fics that turned out to be yours and I was like, "Wait, wait, this is a cookie for Genius in Making Love? And this one, too? I didn't even know it was finished!" So yeah, you blew me away! Genma and Shikamaru are really, REALLY hot together and with Gaara in the middle it was downright boiling. Now I'm going back to those cookies and drool some more XD. Thank you so much for an awesome work!

Wow!! Fabulous!!! What an awesome finish!!

I go away for two weeks and now there's NINE more chapters!!! HOLY SHIT!!! Merry Christmas to me!!! Yeah!!!!!

Thanks for the response! But I try to review after every chapter or if I'm reading a whole mess at once after every chapter that just is AMAZING and I have to say something great about it or a chapter that just GETS ME, you know.

I liked the Temari chapter--weird, weird good that is (uh, it's 3 am Pacific time and I woke up at 8 Eastern time, so my vocab is limited) how it was a sex scene and yet not really a sex scene

Shika's in love and doesn't know it--yeahh!!!!

Hmmm, I think I'll sleep and save the rest for tomorrow since my eyes are going a little "funny"

Thanks for writing and posting this amazing story!!!

OMG You are fucking amazing!!!! So HOT!!! And well written too!!!! Thank you for the best lesson ever!