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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They are very sweet together (and oh no only 4 more chapters - I hope you already have some more story ideas because I really love the way you write.)
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, this was really sweet! I love this story so much!! You've written it and planned it so well!!
I'm happy that Shika's willing to let Genma into his life *yayz for Genma*
I'm sensing a little angsting coming over Shika's feelings for him...hmm, perhaps I'm wrong but whatever...
Before, you said chapter 12 was difficult to write. That's exactly what I was thinking!! I could never see those two in a mutual relationship, basically because Shika's too lazy, and a little too proud at times, and Sai is dead inside : D But you wrote it well - you got the aggrivation that's just so obvious in there well, and it was good, very, very good!!
Hmm...I wonder how many times Shika's showered today... He must be squeaky fucking clean in all the places that don't matter, huh?
Aniwayz, loved this chapter...I'm scared though...the day's almost done!! Ooh, I wonder what'll happen next!! Who's gonna kiss Shika goodnight?!
...wait...Gaara hasn't left Konoha yet...oooooooooh, I just got a GREAT idea for your finale...but I guess it's kinda obvious...
Update soon!!
xxx
I'm happy that Shika's willing to let Genma into his life *yayz for Genma*
I'm sensing a little angsting coming over Shika's feelings for him...hmm, perhaps I'm wrong but whatever...
Before, you said chapter 12 was difficult to write. That's exactly what I was thinking!! I could never see those two in a mutual relationship, basically because Shika's too lazy, and a little too proud at times, and Sai is dead inside : D But you wrote it well - you got the aggrivation that's just so obvious in there well, and it was good, very, very good!!
Hmm...I wonder how many times Shika's showered today... He must be squeaky fucking clean in all the places that don't matter, huh?
Aniwayz, loved this chapter...I'm scared though...the day's almost done!! Ooh, I wonder what'll happen next!! Who's gonna kiss Shika goodnight?!
...wait...Gaara hasn't left Konoha yet...oooooooooh, I just got a GREAT idea for your finale...but I guess it's kinda obvious...
Update soon!!
xxx
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not a monster, a very sexually frustrated authoress that has a fic to finish by the 23rd and no loving since 2 weeks ago with hormones all messed up!I have just thought out Neji and Kiba's styles too well! call it sexual boredom.
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, forgot...Can I request a Neji x Shika x Genma... brain is severely fried!!! SMUT HAPPENS IN THIS LOONY BIN!!!
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I like your choice. Genma is definitely a much overlooked, much loved character of mine and I wish I could see him in more fics, in fact one of my future ones will focus on him but anywho I like your deviation from the norm couplings and...while your toy scene kind of made me wince a little your lemons are so wonderfully hot that I just have to read more! Anyway love your story and the sheer amount of citrus makes me extraordinarily happy!
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Genma, especially your version. He's being so patient and kind. I appreciate that he's a romantic and a little shy, as opposed to the manwhore he's usually portrayed as. You are giving Genma and Shikamaru a happy ending, right? *puppy eyes*
I'm a little surprised that Shikamaru hasn't passed out by now. You know the boy has to be worn out. XD
I'm a little surprised that Shikamaru hasn't passed out by now. You know the boy has to be worn out. XD
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully Sai got his "revenge" out of his system. Enjoyed the last part with Genma. Thanks for the update.
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...this was interesting!
Gomen!! I did read the Temari one, but didn't review so in short - I'm not a Temari fan *but* I realise that it's stupid for me to think that she'd never be involved in a fic such as this. And the chapter was amazing! If I shipped Shika/Tem (which I really, really don't but w/e), then I'd imagine that they would fuck like that. The conversation was so calm, I loved it!!
I didn't read the InoShikaCho chapter because, while I love team 10, I don't really think of them as sex partners, sorry. I like the friendship shared between the three, and I slightly like the idea of Chouji and Ino being together, but no more than that.
THIS chapter, however, was really very entertaining!! I knew you were going to let Sai have revenge, but I never expected that! Love how they both had the oppotunity to use their jutsus - it made it seem like a real fight, only a lot more personal. Genma turning up at the end was really sweet. Now I know you're just toying with us!! I want them to be together!!
Looking forward to the next update!!
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Gomen!! I did read the Temari one, but didn't review so in short - I'm not a Temari fan *but* I realise that it's stupid for me to think that she'd never be involved in a fic such as this. And the chapter was amazing! If I shipped Shika/Tem (which I really, really don't but w/e), then I'd imagine that they would fuck like that. The conversation was so calm, I loved it!!
I didn't read the InoShikaCho chapter because, while I love team 10, I don't really think of them as sex partners, sorry. I like the friendship shared between the three, and I slightly like the idea of Chouji and Ino being together, but no more than that.
THIS chapter, however, was really very entertaining!! I knew you were going to let Sai have revenge, but I never expected that! Love how they both had the oppotunity to use their jutsus - it made it seem like a real fight, only a lot more personal. Genma turning up at the end was really sweet. Now I know you're just toying with us!! I want them to be together!!
Looking forward to the next update!!
xxx
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...this was interesting!
Gomen!! I did read the Temari one, but didn't review so in short - I'm not a Temari fan *but* I realise that it's stupid for me to think that she'd never be involved in a fic such as this. And the chapter was amazing! If I shipped Shika/Tem (which I really, really don't but w/e), then I'd imagine that they would fuck like that. The conversation was so calm, I loved it!!
I didn't read the InoShikaCho chapter because, while I love team 10, I don't really think of them as sex partners, sorry. I like the friendship shared between the three, and I slightly like the idea of Chouji and Ino being together, but no more than that.
THIS chapter, however, was really very entertaining!! I knew you were going to let Sai have revenge, but I never expected that! Love how they both had the oppotunity to use their jutsus - it made it seem like a real fight, only a lot more personal. Genma turning up at the end was really sweet. Now I know you're just toying with us!! I want them to be together!!
Looking forward to the next update!!
xxx
Gomen!! I did read the Temari one, but didn't review so in short - I'm not a Temari fan *but* I realise that it's stupid for me to think that she'd never be involved in a fic such as this. And the chapter was amazing! If I shipped Shika/Tem (which I really, really don't but w/e), then I'd imagine that they would fuck like that. The conversation was so calm, I loved it!!
I didn't read the InoShikaCho chapter because, while I love team 10, I don't really think of them as sex partners, sorry. I like the friendship shared between the three, and I slightly like the idea of Chouji and Ino being together, but no more than that.
THIS chapter, however, was really very entertaining!! I knew you were going to let Sai have revenge, but I never expected that! Love how they both had the oppotunity to use their jutsus - it made it seem like a real fight, only a lot more personal. Genma turning up at the end was really sweet. Now I know you're just toying with us!! I want them to be together!!
Looking forward to the next update!!
xxx
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...this was interesting!
Gomen!! I did read the Temari one, but didn't review so in short - I'm not a Temari fan *but* I realise that it's stupid for me to think that she'd never be involved in a fic such as this. And the chapter was amazing! If I shipped Shika/Tem (which I really, really don't but w/e), then I'd imagine that they would fuck like that. The conversation was so calm, I loved it!!
I didn't read the InoShikaCho chapter because, while I love team 10, I don't really think of them as sex partners, sorry. I like the friendship shared between the three, and I slightly like the idea of Chouji and Ino being together, but no more than that.
THIS chapter, however, was really very entertaining!! I knew you were going to let Sai have revenge, but I never expected that! Love how they both had the oppotunity to use their jutsus - it made it seem like a real fight, only a lot more personal. Genma turning up at the end was really sweet. Now I know you're just toying with us!! I want them to be together!!
Looking forward to the next update!!
xxx
Gomen!! I did read the Temari one, but didn't review so in short - I'm not a Temari fan *but* I realise that it's stupid for me to think that she'd never be involved in a fic such as this. And the chapter was amazing! If I shipped Shika/Tem (which I really, really don't but w/e), then I'd imagine that they would fuck like that. The conversation was so calm, I loved it!!
I didn't read the InoShikaCho chapter because, while I love team 10, I don't really think of them as sex partners, sorry. I like the friendship shared between the three, and I slightly like the idea of Chouji and Ino being together, but no more than that.
THIS chapter, however, was really very entertaining!! I knew you were going to let Sai have revenge, but I never expected that! Love how they both had the oppotunity to use their jutsus - it made it seem like a real fight, only a lot more personal. Genma turning up at the end was really sweet. Now I know you're just toying with us!! I want them to be together!!
Looking forward to the next update!!
xxx