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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...That was so hot it re-heated me coffee. I have to say that I love your lemons. You write them so well and with a great amount of creativity too. I have to say that I love Shika, just in general, but you made him so much hotter. What wonderful citris-y goodness!
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once again, great job! I'm not even into Shika/Chou, I mean there's gotta be 'some' people out there who are just good friends and nothing more, but you did very well on it!
Thanks for reading my stuff! I hope your muses will give you a break soon, at least to finish reading the series.
Also, love the intro! You're just a sweet gooy, love-dovey person at heart, aren't you?
Keep up your excellent work!!
Thanks for reading my stuff! I hope your muses will give you a break soon, at least to finish reading the series.
Also, love the intro! You're just a sweet gooy, love-dovey person at heart, aren't you?
Keep up your excellent work!!
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
{{{chouji}}}
You are sooo good. I think this is the first fiction I've read involving Chouji where he was treated with respect (in a sexual situation) for who he is. I LOVE InoxChouji too.
Every chapter of this is as good as the last and brings something new to the story (and it is a story, not just smex) - how do you do it?
Characterization is great.
You are sooo good. I think this is the first fiction I've read involving Chouji where he was treated with respect (in a sexual situation) for who he is. I LOVE InoxChouji too.
Every chapter of this is as good as the last and brings something new to the story (and it is a story, not just smex) - how do you do it?
Characterization is great.
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how this scene was focused on the conversastion, not so much the sex.
And I know what you mean. My muses are refusing to help me finish Going Under, because they're too interested in continuing my "Gentle-Fist Massage" series. It gets really frustrating, especially since I'm not that far from finishing "Going Under!" Damn rebellious muses! Shouldn't they be doing what we ask?
Anyway, keep up the great work!!
And I know what you mean. My muses are refusing to help me finish Going Under, because they're too interested in continuing my "Gentle-Fist Massage" series. It gets really frustrating, especially since I'm not that far from finishing "Going Under!" Damn rebellious muses! Shouldn't they be doing what we ask?
Anyway, keep up the great work!!
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your Temari/Shika banter is as good as ice cream!
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear Heavens above! I need sex too now!
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like Shika trying to help Choji and Ino get together. I also like the way they ended up having sex with Choji in Ino and Shika in Choji.
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! It's like - 'He's a she, he's a he, and he's a he-she!!'
Lol, I dunno...but daaaaamn, you're explicit, girl!! I loves it though.
Shika's having the best day of his troublesome little life, doncha think? I'm seriously in love with this fic right now; it's such a good idea and stuff and....KYAAA!! I'm just fangirling, ignore me...squee!!
Glad Naruto got his two cents, and he made one hell of a debut in this story. *Sigh...* Naruto's awesome...
And so is Shika...I wonder how much else he can take!!
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Lol, I dunno...but daaaaamn, you're explicit, girl!! I loves it though.
Shika's having the best day of his troublesome little life, doncha think? I'm seriously in love with this fic right now; it's such a good idea and stuff and....KYAAA!! I'm just fangirling, ignore me...squee!!
Glad Naruto got his two cents, and he made one hell of a debut in this story. *Sigh...* Naruto's awesome...
And so is Shika...I wonder how much else he can take!!
xxx
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Thank you sooooo much for the GenmaxShika! And the kagebunshin foursome was great, too! Keep up the awesome work! You rock!
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
shemale? ~wild (and totally hot) *sigh* I wish my husband could do kage bunshin :D