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You were right. This was a very smutty chapter. It was also very enjoyable. Loved the foursome clone sex. Thanks for the wonderful update.

I love how many hours a day has *wink*

More smut please!!!

Dear God--all this since Dec. 4--I'm only up to Chapter 4 and thrilled I finally got over here before all 14 chapters are done. First off, you do rimming the best of anyone I've read so far. Gaara counting the times--only penetrative--was so funny. Iruka's fantasies were super hot, and the whole Neji thing smoking too. I didn't really get how Neji went from being busted as unable to act like a whore to acting like an uber-whore, but hey, it's fiction, and all for fun. Sakura's little scene was good, too, especially since Sai is going to give it to Shika--oh my I can't wait for that one!

The threesome--holy shit!! That's got to be one of the fucking hottest threesomes ever! Amazing!

Ahhh! So romantic!! (Chap. 8) That's the most romantic Genma ever! Wonderful! Dammit, only one more chapter, and I'm caught up!

Ok, I know you said you have the whole damn thing plotted out, but GENMA AND SHIKA, SHIKA AND GENMA, SHIKA/GENMA/GAARA, GAARA/SHIKA/GENMA, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!

*weeps brokenly, crying, "Genma, hang on baby, hang on, you only have four or five more chapters of hell, then surely, surely, she will reward you, no one could be so cruel to sweet Genma"*

Well, if I recall in the Kage bushin training, Naruto would fall asleep exhausted later, so it's totally IC to have him collapse, and pretty funny. I love Naruto's pick up line--I cleaned my room or something like that. That's so Naruto. Ah, and Shikamaru the genius, stumped over Genma, my little heart flutters with hope!

I like the idea of Kankuro and Temari teaching Gaara how to have sex and how sweet I think it was that Gaara wanted experience because he was afraid that Shika would not want him if he didn't know what he was doing. So since Shika has had sex with Temari and Kiba now will we get to see Kankuro and Shika too? I keep thinking of a foursome with Kiba, Kankuro, Gaara and Shika but that might be a bit much plus I know youv'e already got your pairings/chapters planned out. I also think it was nice that Temari knows Shika loves Genma even if Shika does not know/will not admit it to himself yet.

...You must be draining your muses dry! I know I have!
Keep up the great work! I very eagerly await the next hour!

Very nice and sweet!
I have to read it in one sitting!! I just have to remember to breathe every time I stand.
Keep up the great work, I love the direction this is going in!

{{{Genma}}}