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Wonderful threesome. Hope you plan on doing more. Sorry for the lousy review - I'm a little incoherent right now from your wonderful writing. Thanks for another great chapter.

omg... this is like. i don't know... i've been reading fanfiction for so long, and you... i can say, that i've never been so painfuly turned on like now. i'm so wet that i don't know now what to do :D well i know, but i'm gonna torture myself for an ocasion.
YOU and just you! are amazing. my god..

Very enjoyable chapter. I do like Asuma alot. Enjoyed the cigarette play and the interaction between Shika and Asuma. I love it when a story has both sex and humor and does it well (which you do). Thanks for another chapter.

You minx...

I'm not as into the whole Asuma/Shika thing as I know I probably should be. Nevertheless, I have payed attention to quite a few things concerning them, and this, my dear, was great!

Asuma's teasing was right on the mark, and Shikamaru's irritation and casualness were perfect also. The cigarette, I'll admit, made me freak a little, but I couldn't help but be dragged along with Shika's feelings of it too. And the image of Asuma simply reading over him as it was happening ignited my artists inspiration, and I may just have to go draw it right now.

I'm SO enjoying this fic; it really is just getting better and better!

p.s. - Kudos on bringing Genma in. He needs love, period.

xxx

Wow, that was hot...

I'm HUGE Kiba/Shika fan (check out my profile if you need proof), and I accept it any form at all. Shino...not so much...but he seems to fit here. Like, I can't really see this whole scene happening without him.

So glad you updated (and with my fave. pairing, minus Shino, though I do love him) so soon. Seriously, these two need more time together...perhaps you can squeeze another little adventure for them before Shika's day is done? It'd make me bake cookies, which I shall force feed you once I hunt you down and chain you to my room, having you write fan-fics for me non-stop...maybe not...I'm not that sadistic, I leave that to my fics...

Seriously though, great job on the pairing(?)

I have to sleep...but I shall be having obscene yet splendid dreams tonight thanks to you, darling.

xxx

Ahaha! Reading this really feels like watching porn! I love it!

Remember that the reason we are all reading your smut is because we all enjoy reading smut! I love your story and the fact that Shikamaru is your favorite Naruto character; I happen to think Shikamaru is the sexiest character in the Naruto universe (and that's saying a LOT with characters like Kakashi and Asuma around). You and Word_slave seem to have an enthusiasm for Shikamaru in common, which easily makes you two of my favorite fanfiction writers.

But I digress. The story is hot and I am loving every word of it. Please do not abandon! ShikaNeji is one of my fave pairings and you have covered it well. Who gets a piece of that next? I can't wait to find out!

Chess sex?! There's crack for you. But what hot crack it was...!

Loved the third chapter. I simply adore Neji, even more so with Shika! They just seem like they should be competative, but Shika's too lazy and Neji's too...righteous? Whatever, you brought that out with the whole weekly chess game thing, and I loved it.

Also, who knew Temari was so talented at creating new sex games?! Lucky for Shika though, he's already had sex three times today!

Now, I'm on to chapter four. I'm a HUGE Sakura fan so I don't mind reading Het if she's involved ^^

xxx

Wow, that was good.

I can't write Het for shit, not that I ever really want to. But I think you got it great! I can't wait for the Sai twist you've popped up in there. I love the idea of Sakura and Sai being together, even if Sai is a little of a...flaming homo...impression I get anyway. Maybe I'm just shallow.

Shika's so dirty...I love it! Can't wait for the next part! I wonder who it'll be...makes it exciting!

xxx

Love the idea that Shika isn't really lazy he just saves up all his energy for sex.