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for Genius at Making Love

by KohakuShadow

person Sugary
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is sooo hot....

I've never really read a Shikamaru centric plot like this, and seeing how he is one of my favorite characters, I'm excited I got to read something like this. My favorite chapter so far was Iruka and Shikamaru. (drools)

Keep it up!
person cynaga
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now I want a Sai and Sakura chapter. [whine]
person llyoung
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I would love to play chess with Shika and/or Neji myself. Love the humor you put into your stories.
person cynaga
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, yes. gulp. You do have a way with a lemon. LOVED Shika/Iru. THANKS!

(I still want my 11 times. :) )
person Jien
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh update soon!!!!!!
person pen_name
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoah! I just read both chapters and I have to admit... I can't wait for more! XD Hmm... I wonder who's next... *drooling at the possibilities*
person llyoung
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved Iruka's fantasies and yes they both do make very good whores.
person Word_Slave
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh, this was even better!!!! I liked the premise!! But I do have a request, could you do a companion fic with those Shika gets together??? Naruto and Iruka?? or have the threesome with Kakashi??? Okay, so now my perv side shows. But then again, since I'm writing a Kakashi/Naruto/Sasuke fic, I suppose this is no surprise!? Lol.
Your writing is great!!! More soon please?
And you're so good that if you have a pairing you want to request from me, I'll try to write a story for you if you like!!!
Slave
person Koji
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woooo!!!! Second chapter!

I've seen one or two things with Shika/Iruka or vice-versa, but never tended to give the pairing much thought. That, however, may have just converted me. Iruka is awesome everywhere, whatever he's doing. And Shikamaru, well...I don't have to tell YOU how amazing he is...

I love how nonchalant Shika is afterwards, and how panicky Iruka is at the beginning. Seems all very much in character, as well as amazingly written.

Can't wait for the next part!!

xxx
person cynaga
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more. I love Shika. And Kiba and Kanky are too yummy too. 11 times!? Ok, where can I sign up? :D