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for My Favorite Mistake

by riddlestar

person Jan
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Poor Naruto, he’s in for a tough fight with Sasuke’s stubbornness ;-)

Please update chapter 12 soon ^_^

Jan

PS: If it’s not t o much to ask is there a way that you could email me a notice when you next update?
My email is naiomi2nailyn@yahoo.com
person Meg
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday sweetheart!

this was a good chapter.. it looks like Sasuke's finally realizing his true feelings..hehe..
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
happy b'day ^_^ all the best to you (and by that i mean chocolate cake and lots of chocolate icecream ^_^)

i really feel sorry for sasuke, he is so confused about the situation well not confused but he is trying to reinforce his barriers. naru just has to be patient and not too pushy.
person Kazuko
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so you update here first? good to know! hahaha sasuke works at a whore house! hmmm naruto wonder how you knew about that tattoo...so that was one of his old haunts. wonder what sasuke would do with that knowledge! great chapter! and teme could pull off just about anything i think except for hot pink and neon green spandex. ha! please please update soon!!
person Anon
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uh, oh! What is Naruto going to do?! Hurry with the next chapter!!
person clytn
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Can't wait for next update.

Oh and Happy Birthday
person Jelp
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Happy birthday!

Anyway - I really liked this most recent chapter. It seems that perhaps Sasuke is flirting back a little. Maybe he wants Naruto more than he realizes?

I read this ages ago, and it's nice to see another update for it. :D Looking forward to the next update! ~ Jelp
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! and great chapter too! X3 sasuke in a sexxy kimono--- very cute! and poor naruto XD actually i love all their misery! does that make me a bad person? lol please update soon-- i love this story to death and was super exited to see the update! i really want to know what naruto does next!
person Munez
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday! I hope you have a good one!

I'm so glad this updated. I missed it! Please add more soon; I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
person StaplersBreak
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing. Thank you for being able to write. Jeez, you have no idea how annoyed I am at this site right now. Nobody seems to give a damn about the sludge they post. Love your story. It has a lot of thought and substance to it. Not just wham, bam, well, you know. I can totally see Sasuke being a whiny bitch about the whole thing. Naruto's character is perfect and sizzly. Is it really your b-day? Seems like I'm the one getting the present. Have a good one.