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for My Favorite Mistake

by riddlestar

person Nanin
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I remember you!
Oh man, I love this story.
And I really, desperately want to know what happens next.
More, pretty please?
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for updates!! :D (I love this story and am glad to see it return!)


Great chapter. Looks like Naruto is slowly wearing down Sasuke's defenses. Sasuke needs to start viewing Naruto as a more three demential person. There's alot more going on under the surface that he's not given credit for. Plus this whole Kyuubi mating thing that has yet to fully be disclosed. I look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work! ^^
person Mija
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yup your right it was a long time since your last update that I had to actually re read the whole thing again to find out just what I was getting the email alert for lol, and I have to say I am soooooooooooooo glad you emailed me to let me know and that you havent given up on this fic, ooooh I just love a very horney and very agressive Naruto, it serves Sasu right, most fics I read, its Sasu whose always the one whose the agressive one who pushes and finally seduces our poor innocent Naru, but I sooo love your Naru who is NOT nieve and innocent and KNOWS exatly what he wants and goes after it with gusto, hehehe, and Sasu doesnt have a chance against him, LUVE it, ty ty ty for the update and if you can please still send me an email when you update it again I would be ever so grateful, I am grateful that you decided to continue with this fic, its a very good one that I for one am very glad to continue reading, ty ty ty, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know I'm a terrible woman because I didn't give you your well earner review TT-TT I'm sorry

where to begin, well first I guess the fact that I'm very happy that you wrote an other chapter as I really like the fic... :D
I'm feeling really stupid right now as I forget pretty much everything I wanted to say... TT-TT after you updated for me... I suck... when it's your b-day hon? I may write something for you if you want because you are too nice and I feel so bad... I'll stop the rambling
I liked Neji as the leader of the team
I like when Naruto let all the neighbors know about the stuff that happened
and I loved the kiss they had when they were bathing...
:D
person Kang
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great job!!!!! write more, please!!! even if it takes you a long time, i'm still very happy to read this when it's updated. it's one of my favorite stories, and trust me, I've read a lot of Naruto stories. :D keep up the good work!
person BelleDragon
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you've updated this fic and am really looking forward to the next chapter! It should be an interesting night in the tent XD :)
person Telpei
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY An update! I've been waiting for AGES! Please don't keep me waiting that long for the next chapter! I'm totally in love with this story. A resistant Uchiha is just too adorable! I love him. I can't wait to see how Naruto wins his heart, and how he comes to realize that he's been falling for his dobe for a long time ^^ and I love Neji too!! Haha it's great to see he's on Naruto's side :) Maybe he can even make Sasuke a little jealous :P
I look forward to reading a lot more of this story! Please keep writing!
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!! I was so happy to see this updated! I love it and I'm glad it didn't fade away!!.. Please, please let me know next time you update!!

Looking forward to more!!
person Rose
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I am most certainly glad you didn't let it fade away. I love this story. It is similar to many stories in many ways but original in even more. I like your Sasuke, he doesn't take things lying down, and its realistic that he would be apprehensive and unmovable when it comes to changing his relationship with Naruto. Neji's small spotlight was fantastic, and Naruto is himself even in these circumstances. I hope you continue to update, I look forward to seeing how this pans out.
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is such an idiot! He doesn't deserve Naruto or his love! The asshole! Awaiting the next chapter